New Kitsune archtype.

[Vladmirfox]

So I used to play yugioh and always felt that it needed more foxes so here's my attempt at doing just that.

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Monsters

NAME: Kitsune
TEXT: When this card is summoned place one "Kitsune Counter" on this card (max 10). During the End phase place one "Kitsune Counter" on this card. This card can be tributed to Special Summon from your hand, deck or graveyard a "Kitsune" monster whose Level/Rank is equal to or less then the number of "Kitsune Counters" on this card.
ATK: 1000/DEF: 1000


NAME: Kitsune Spirit
TEXT: Discard this card to add up to two "Kitsune" cards from your graveyard to your hand.
ATK: 0/DEF: 0


NAME: Kitsune Spy
TEXT: This card can only be Tribute Summoned. This card can use your opponent's monster as Tribute if so then this card is summoned under your opponent's control. If this card is summoned in this way then your opponent must reveal thier hand.
ATK: 2000/DEF: 1500


NAME: Inari, God of Kitsune
TEXT: This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing a "Kitsune" with 10 Kitsune Counters on it. When this card is summoned send as many "Kitsune" cards from your hand and deck to the graveyard as you want. This card gains 1000 attack for each "Kitsune" card in the graveyard. When this card is destroyed you can Special Summon up to two Kitsune monsters from the graveyard.
ATK: 0/DEF: 0

Spells

NAME: Nurture
TEXT: This card can only be activated when a "Kitsune" is on the field. When this card is activated you can place X number of Kitsune Counters on a face up "Kitsune" where X is x500 life points per Kitsune Counter.


NAME: Gathering of Kitsune
TEXT: When this card is activated Summon as many level 4 or lower "Kitsune" monsters as you want from your hand, deck or graveyard. For each card summoned by this effect you pay 500 life points.


NAME: Lonely Winter
TEXT: This card can only be activated when your opponent targets a "Kitsune" monster. Each player chooses one monster and destroys all cards except that one.


NAME: Kitsune Mask
TEXT: If you control a "Kitsune" monster then equip this card to one of your opponent's monsters and take control of it. The monster equipped with this card is treated as a "Kitsune" monster.


NAME: Kitsune Forest of Illusion
TEXT: All "Kitsune" monsters gain 500 ATK and DEF. During your End Phase double the amount of "Kitsune Counters" a "Kitsune" monster would receive.

New Cards

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Monsters

NAME: Kitsune Warrior
TEXT: When this card is destroyed by battle or card effect your opponent takes X amount of life point damage where X is the amount of "Kitsune Counters" on this card (max 10). During your Main Phase you can discard 1 "Kitsune" card to add 2 "Kitsune Counters" to this card.
ATK: 1800/DEF 1000


NAME: Kitsune Sage
TEXT: This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is a Normal Monster on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it become an Effect Monster with this effect.
- During your Standby Phase you can Discard 1 card to Special Summon 1 "Kitsune" monster from your hand, deck or graveyard.
ATK: 2500/DEF: 2000

Spells

NAME: Kitsune Fire
TEXT: Discard 1 card to destroy 1 card on your opponent's field. Your opponent takes 500 life points of effect damage.


NAME: Kitsune Illusion
TEXT: This card can only be equipped to a "Kitsune" monster. When this card is activated you choose 1 monster card on your opponent's side of the field the equipped monster now has this monster's name, effect and ATK and DEF. When this card is destroyed you take the chosen monsters ATK as life point damage.


NAME: Fox Hunt
TEXT: All "Kitsune" monsters gain 500 ATK and DEF for every "Kitsune" monster on the field or the graveyard. During the End Phase you must discard 1 card from your hand if you can not then destroy this card.

Note: if it isn't to much trouble would someone help me with grammer/proper wording??

As stated above I'm new so if there is something major I'm screwing up on then please tell me and well opinions on the cards would be nice. Will upload more tomorrow. :3

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

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[Vladmirfox]

New Cards

 

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Monsters

NAME: Kitsune Warrior

TEXT: When this card is destroyed by battle or card effect your opponent takes X amount of life point damage where X is the amount of "Kitsune Counters" on this card (max 10). During your Main Phase you can discard 1 "Kitsune" card to add 2 "Kitsune Counters" to this card.

ATK: 1800/DEF 1000

 

NAME: Kitsune Sage

TEXT: This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is a Normal Monster on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it become an Effect Monster with this effect.

- During your Standby Phase you can Discard 1 card to Special Summon 1 "Kitsune" monster from your hand, deck or graveyard.

ATK: 2500/DEF: 2000

 

Spells

NAME: Kitsune Fire

TEXT: Discard 1 card to destroy 1 card on your opponent's field. Your opponent takes 500 life points of effect damage.

 

NAME: Kitsune Illusion

TEXT: This card can only be equipped to a "Kitsune" monster. When this card is activated you choose 1 monster card on your opponent's side of the field the equipped monster now has this monster's name, effect and ATK and DEF. When this card is destroyed you take the chosen monsters ATK as life point damage.

 

NAME: Fox Hunt

TEXT: All "Kitsune" monsters gain 500 ATK and DEF for every "Kitsune" monster on the field or the graveyard. During the End Phase you must discard 1 card from your hand if you can not then destroy this card.

 

 

 

So am adding 5 new cards and would love people's help/opinions on them.

 

Also well how would I format a card if I wanted it to be a trap monster? I've got some ideas but no idea on wording of things.