The Necromancer - Member The 13th Legion

[fyther]

Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned (from your hand) by having 4 or more  "The 13th Legion" monster in your graveyard. This card cannot be destroyed by card effect  .

Each time it is destroyed by battle , during your opponent End Phrase, Special Summon it in DEF position and place 1 Death Counter on it .

This card gain 300 DEF point by each Death Counter on it. Once per turn: Remove 3 Death Counter on this card and targeting 1 "The 13th Legion" monster in your graveyard, Special Summon it in ATK position. That target cannot be destroyed by battle. When you control a "The 13th Legion" monster that special summon in that way , Monsters your opponent controls cannot target f"The Necromancer - Member The 13th Legion" for attacks.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm trying to build a DIY series deck , please give me some comment and advise because I'm not sure my card is too OP or not.     

 

[Jack of Spades]

Well the card seems fine, but I am not knowledgeable when it comes to remember what cards could make this card broken so don't take word for it. Just polish the grammar/PSCT a bit, as other members will kill you for it (sometimes anyway). Refer to this topic if you aren't sure your cards are balanced before posting. Also provide a bit of context for what "The 13th Legion" monster are, as from what I am getting from this one card is that they are a battle focused archetype who revolve around the Graveyard and counter generation in order to get going and start making plays.

[fyther]

Well the card seems fine, but I am not knowledgeable when it comes to remember what cards could make this card broken so don't take word for it. Just polish the grammar/PSCT a bit, as other members will kill you for it (sometimes anyway). Refer to this topic if you aren't sure your cards are balanced before posting.

Thanks for you comment.

[Jack of Spades]

Thanks for you comment.

Welcome :p

[fyther]

Welcome :p

I have read the topic that you send to me, It is useful. But I can't fix my grammar problem because I'm not native speaker, sorry. 

[Jack of Spades]

I have read the topic that you send to me, It is useful. But I can't fix my grammar problem because I'm not native speaker, sorry. 

Well that is easily fixable with a bit of practice, just give it the best you got and you should be able to write in English better in no time.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must be Special Summoned (from your hand) while you have 4 or more "The 13th Legion" monsters in your Graveyard and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. Cannot be destroyed by card effects. This card gains 300 DEF for every Death Counter on it. During your opponent's End Phase, if this card was destroyed: Special Summon it in Defense Position, then place 1 Death Counter on it. Once per turn: Remove 3 Death Counters from this card, then target 1 "The 13th Legion" monster in your Graveyard; Special Summon it. That monster cannot be destroyed by battle. While you control a "The 13th Legion" monster that was Special Summoned by this card's effect, your opponent cannot target "The Necromancer - Member The 13th Legion" for attacks.

Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must be Special Summoned (from your hand) while you have 4 or more "The 13th Legion" monsters in your Graveyard and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. (1) Cannot be destroyed by card effects. (2) This card gains 300 DEF for every Death Counter on it. (3) During your opponent's End Phase, if this card was destroyed: Special Summon it in Defense Position, then place 1 Death Counter on it. (4) Once per turn: Remove 3 Death Counters from this card, then target 1 "The 13th Legion" monster in your Graveyard; Special Summon it. That monster cannot be destroyed by battle. (5) While you control a "The 13th Legion" monster that was Special Summoned by this card's (4) effect, your opponent cannot target "The Necromancer - Member The 13th Legion" for attacks.

 

Let's go over the card, shall we?

• Right now, card is impossible to Summon because you don't have other members of this Archetype. Right now, you can only have 2 copies of this card in the Graveyard alone, and that isn't going to satisfy the requirements.
  • Additionally, this card doesn't have valid targets to revive from its effects.
• Please note that if this card does go to the Graveyard, the counters on this card also go; thus, when it does revive, you only have 1 counter on this card.
  • Moreover, there is no way you can accumulate 3+ Death Counters on this card to revive stuff; least not now.
• Stats aren't really that great for a Level 9; yeah, it can't die by card effects, but it's prone to getting run over by nearly every relevant monster seeing play. I guess you could make an easy Rank 9 with 2+ copies; assuming you can even get them out.

If you post stuff from a custom Archetype, you need to provide us with more than just 1 card; otherwise it's very difficult to grade how the card works.

[fyther]

 

Let's go over the card, shall we?

• Right now, card is impossible to Summon because you don't have other members of this Archetype. Right now, you can only have 2 copies of this card in the Graveyard alone, and that isn't going to satisfy the requirements.
  • Additionally, this card doesn't have valid targets to revive from its effects.
• Please note that if this card does go to the Graveyard, the counters on this card also go; thus, when it does revive, you only have 1 counter on this card.
  • Moreover, there is no way you can accumulate 3+ Death Counters on this card to revive stuff; least not now.
• Stats aren't really that great for a Level 9; yeah, it can't die by card effects, but it's prone to getting run over by nearly every relevant monster seeing play. I guess you could make an easy Rank 9 with 2+ copies; assuming you can even get them out.

If you post stuff from a custom Archetype, you need to provide us with more than just 1 card; otherwise it's very difficult to grade how the card works.

I will make more card about this archetype.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

To be honest, the supports should've come before this card, but yeah.

 

Once you make the supports, just make sure you post them in the correct area (Multiples).