[Written] Ghost Banshee & Falling Leaves

[Dragulas]

Atributte: DARK

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Psychic / Tuner / Effect

​During either player´s turn, when a card or effect is activated that includes an effect that moves a card(s) in the Graveyard to a different place: You can discard this card; negate the effect. You can only use this effect of "Ghost Banshee & Falling Leaves " once per turn. During the End Phase, if this effect was activated this turn (and was not negated): You can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard.

ATK / 0   DEF / 1800

[Darj]

I see the attempt at making this card as part of the Ghost Girl series but you are missing some flavor bits: first, there is already a DARK one with Winter Cherries, and second, they don't have any additional effect like yours has. Then, to be more loyal with the series, you would have to come up with an OCG name that is a pun on its two names.

 

You could make it WIND because of autumn and falling leaves, but you would have remove the self-revival effect to stay on theme, which may be undesirable, and also figure out the OCG name. Another option is shifting the concept entirely and instead make it a counterpart or opposite of Skull Meister, a hand-trap that involves the grave.

 

Flavor issues aside, the Necrovalley-ish negation is certainly good and would be welcomed, and the second effect makes it even better, which is a quite evil thing to give it because you are getting your card back practically as a plus, while letting you take advantage of its Tuner sub-type for Synchro plays. I do feel this last effect is too good for this card and pushing it when it already has an amazing hand-trap effect.