Exodia Rebirth (W.I.P)

[Lucas_W4R]

The Forbidden Ones Body

Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must be Special Summoned by

sending "Exodia Incarnate" to the graveyard., and cannot be Special

Summoned by other ways. This card gains the Effects of "Exodia Incarnate".

 

Exodia, The Millennium Keeper

Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must be Special Summoned

(from your Graveyard) by Tributing 3 "Exodia" monsters, and cannot

be Special Summoned by other ways. Once per turn you can get an

"Exodia" or "Forbidden One" during your End Phase. This card gains

2000 ATK for each "Exodia" and "Forbidden One" monster in your

Graveyard. There can only be one "Exodia, The Millennium Keeper" on the field.

 

Exodia, Gods Forbidden Ruler

This card can only be Ritual Summoned by Tributing the card,

"Exodia The Forbidden One". When this card is sent to the Field to

the Graveyard Add "Exodia The Forbidden One" from your Graveyard

to your Hand.

 

Exodia The Normal

Once per turn: You can discard 1 Spellcaster-Type monster then draw 1 card.

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Exodia's Body

 

There's no such card as Exodia's Incarnate; we have The Legendary Exodia Incarnate, but that's a different card altogether. So yeah, either fix this or add Exodia's Incarnate because right now, card is unsummonable.

 

Millennium Keeper

 

OK...you need to figure out a way to get this into the Graveyard. I guess using Normal is an option, but yeah. That being said, I do not see you summoning the Exodia parts onto the field separately, so card isn't going to do much. Granted, it's a heavier copy of the aforementioned Incarnate with 6000 ATK minimum, which I do have some concern over. I am also going to assume that you're allowed to search for another Exodia piece every turn. (You need to use proper card wording, because "get" can imply two different things; revival or searching).

 

God's Forbidden Ruler

 

Do you understand how a Ritual Monster works? Yes, you can technically Tribute a particular monster (and 2 others) to summon a new Ritual in older video games, but that also implies the use of a Ritual Spell Card, which you do not have. Also, stats are extremely busted for a Level 3 (even Rank 3s like Number 30 don't have that much power without drawbacks), and why is it a Tuner? Yes, Exodia's head is still Limited right now, so chances of you drawing it is 1/40 ~ 1/35 (depending on design/whatever), but this doesn't have a reason to be here.

 

(I guess you get a backup plan if things go sour with amassing the parts in hand, but why?)

 

Exodia the Normal

 

This one is technically okay, and could see some usage as a generic draw tech for other Spellcaster decks.

 

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If you're adding more, then fine, but you really need to fix some of these cards. Right now, Exodia doesn't really need support cards (and Forbidden Ruler is a forced addition here).

[Lucas_W4R]

thx i will change it to your views ;D