Queen Zee and Flesh Golem/Patchwork Zombie

[FanOfFiends]

Working on a fan comic of me own design, and these are a pair of cards I came up with.

 

Queen Zee, Lv5, EARTH, Warrior/Effect, 1500/1200

"When this card is Normal Summoned, Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower Zombie monster (from your hand). Increase the ATK of this card by 100 for every Zombie monster on the field. As long as you control a Zombie monster, this card cannot be targeted by battle or opponent’s card effects. As long as you control this face-up card, you control all Zombie monsters on the field."

 

This one's fun. She's an actual character in the comic, and she basically looks like the image in the card. I image her having this zombie pendant/fetish that allows her to control them. No zombies are safe! Muwahahaha...! Yeah, ok, anyway. She's a monster spirit/card as well, so here she is; this one I feel is one of my more solid card designs, personally, but critique is always welcome. I posted this one mainly for reference for the next card, which is the one I'm more concerned about.

 

Flesh Golem, Lv8, EARTH, Zombie/Effect, 3000/1000

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. If you control “Queen Zee,” you can banish 5 Zombie monsters from the field or your GY: Special Summon this card (from your hand) in face up ATK position. While this card is on the field, Queen Zee cannot be targeted by your opponent. If this card would be destroyed by battle or card effect, reduce its ATK by 500 instead; destroy this card if its ATK cannot be reduced."

 

Haven't really cemented the name just yet, as you can see in the title. Maybe you guys can chime in? I used the (zombie) Hulk in this image because it fits the power I want it to convey, but in my head and on the page it's stitched all together like Frankenstein or D&D's Flesh Golems. Suggestions are more than welcome.

 

I've also been toying with the idea of making this guy a Union monster, but I'm not sure on the grammar I would use. I want these two cards to be used in tandem--I picture Queen Zee sitting on his shoulder while he fights for her. As a union, I would also give Queen Zee a 3000ATK.

 

Was also thinking (if making him a Union doesn't work out) that this guy can only be played in ATK mode, so I would make his DEF 0.

 

Thoughts?

 

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