my first card what do you guys think?

[neekosun]

[neekosun]

open to any and all discussion and constructive criticism about this card.

[Starofnights]

Great job!

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

Great job!

 

As I told you in the other thread, you need to provide proper critique of a user's works when posting in Custom Cards. Compliments are allowed, but you must provide a qualitative response. 

 

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(I had a saved post for this thread, but YCM deleted it)

 

Anyway...I guess you can use it to copy Alternative White or one of the Fusions, but given the stat drop for every time you do this, do you really want to do this in Blue-Eyes? Only thing worth doing is likely copying Alternative to blow up something and/or fuse Spirit Dragon to float into Azure-Eyes or whatever LIGHT Dragon Synchro you find appropriate. 

 

(Also because this will be taking up the EMZ slot and then ask self "do you want this over Number 38, Felgrand, Spirit Dragon or one of their Fusions / bosses?")

[neekosun]

i made the card with a deck in mind that focuses on maximizing the effectiveness of beacon of white, it gives you an extra way to to put four blue-eyes monsters in your graveyard in one turn also as it can be special summoned from the graveyard itself and have its effects negated it makes it possible to summon what is essentially a blue eyes ultimate that can attack at least three times.

also if you have dimension guardian and are running blue eyes toon dragons it could make for a 3500 point direct attacker, i was thinking that maybe the 1000 ATk point subtract was a little high but i didnt want to make the card way too overpowered. do you think a 500 attack point subtraction would be fair?

[Dokutah]

if anything we can try to tidy-up the wording borrowing The Tyrant Neptune text since its similar:

 

When this card is Fusion Summoned: Target up to 3 "Blue-Eyes" Effect Monster in the Graveyard that was used as this card Fusion Material for the Fusion Summon; This card lose 500 ATK for each of those target(s). and then, this card gains those target's effect(s). During the End Phase of this turn this card is Fusion Summoned: Destroy it.

 

1) omit the "End of the Duel" clause since the effect gain is already permanent until its demise.

2) omit "send to the GY" since usually destroyed card is sent there anyway

 

to answer your latest question, yes. 500 lose per effect gain is enough. this guy is already a 1-trick-pony with the Self-Destruct effect so it seems counter-productive for having only 1500 stat when this card with all its investment cannot help you to push or end the game

 

that being said from what i read from all possible materials on this card. i actually rather to Special Summon this card  as a sole vanilla-beater instead going with Fusion since for 500-1500 stat loss the best effect to be copied by this card would be either Chaos Max, Twin Burst, and Alternative. which already better than this card and require less investment

 

as for your opinion on Dimension Guardian and Beacon of the White. both of the card sadly not see play in most build i checked throughout this post typing. Dimension being kinda trash and Beacon fall short in favor of consistency-boosting cards to aid a cheap-yet-strong board that last more than this card life-span

[neekosun]

the until end of duel is because the card can be special summoned from the graveyard but cards that have effects that limit special summoning remove that possibility. 

most importantly the criticism is appreciated and will definitely be taken into account, i am working on a set of unstable fusion cards and have posted three others i would appreciate any critique you might have on those as well .

[Dokutah]

the until end of duel is because the card can be special summoned from the graveyard but cards that have effects that limit special summoning remove that possibility 

ok i need extra enlightment about this

 

or maybe you meant that this card can inherit effects even when it sent to GY?

 

PS: maybe instead of making Unstables cards one-each across different post on singles it would be better and neat looking to post all off them on one post on Multiples category

[neekosun]

yes thats a better way of wording it so after it is destroyed if you used a card that says it can only be special summoned in a certain way you cant revive it so locking it in the GY if you chose to give it an op effect yet it can still be treated as a normal blue eye ultimate in the GY if you chose not to buff it with effects

[neekosun]

 

3 "Blue-Eyes" Monsters

When this card is Fusion Summoned: You can target up to 3 "Blue-Eyes" Effect Monsters in the Graveyard that were used as Fusion Materials for the Fusion Summon of this card; This card loses 500 ATK for each of those target(s) until the end of the duel. and then, this card gains those target's effect(s) until the end of the duel. During the End Phase of this turn this card is Fusion Summoned: Destroy it.

[neekosun]

ok i need extra enlightment about this

 

or maybe you meant that this card can inherit effects even when it sent to GY?

 

PS: maybe instead of making Unstables cards one-each across different post on singles it would be better and neat looking to post all off them on one post on Multiples category

made a post in multiples there are now five cards in this set