Hi any suggestions are appreciated but this is what I have so far:

[GlassUser]

 

[GlassUser]

I'm kin of new so don't hate please

[GlassUser]

look: 

I make my cards in pairs or triplets but gtg so his twin will come out on the form later

[Tinkerer]

Hello, fine person.

I saw you posted these in the wrong area before. For now, I just want to point out some etiquette things, but do make sure to look through the rules when you get a chance.

• Please post the card effects under the card picture. Even if your cards can be easily read, it's a common courtesy and it'll help when you DO have a card that's hard to see.
• Please edit your post (there should be a button in the bottom of your post) rather than posting things separately. It'll make things easier to see as a whole, especially if they are meant to work together.
• Do not ask for people to post cards in your thread. There is a rule against posting in other people's threads. If you and someone else want to work together, message them and make sure to say they are collaborators.

 

Just so you know, right now, you posted these cards in the "Advanced" section. That means people will respond based on the current power level of the meta. I will say that no one will be intentionally "hating", but criticism will come from the card's inherent balance + how useful they'd be against the meta.

I may pop back in and help out with wording, but if you need any further help with anything, feel free to PM me.

[GlassUser]

I don't want people to post cards I simply am asking for broad ideas to base off of but thank you for your suggestions

 

also if you could say things in simpler ways it would be best because I am constantly stressed and cant think straight...

It took an hour to make Obelisk... and then another to edit him

[GlassUser]

how do I delete posts I cant get rid of this one when I meant to add it to the other one

 

 

I've read it.., but what card do you need me to fix?

[Tinkerer]

You can't delete your posts, but it's fine. Just be aware next time, OK?

For now, you can choose a single type for your monsters. If you want them to have extra types, it needs to be part of the effect.

Scorpius (and other Fusions/Synchros/Xyzs) need to have summoning conditions. You should also remove its flavor text. Flavor text is only on Normal monsters.

[Dokutah]

Sorry if im seems harsh earlier, but rules are made so everyone equally enjoy the site 

Well there are reason why i suggest you to post on Casual (the bottom link i sent you) just like Redro has point out above in Advance section like here we expect quite a lot on the card presented since it will compare to the cards meta which in case you dont know is term for cards that used and proven in officials tournaments. We talking about quite powerful cards (yet somewhat still balance) that used by professional players. 

On the other hand i can see that your card is product of passion, "i made this for fun" kinda thing. Which is OK, we equally appriciate such card. But it will fit more in Casuals since on there you will not be judge as "harsh" as in here. While user can also make a "fun card" in this section, they still be critiqued based on "how real" (correct wording, stat, typing), fairness, and power (can it stand against meta cards)

as for your cards:

My comment is still the same for fusion, too specific. You said that the LIGHT/DARK restriction so it will not become OP, but regular Polymerization can fuse all attribute no problem so this card is actually underpowered compare to that card. While ATK boost seems useful, i dont think of any Chaos deck [term for deck that mix LIGHT and DARK] have fusion to go too

Rough fix: 

Fusion Summon 1 Fusion Monster from your Extra Deck, using LIGHT and/or DARK monsters from your hand or field as Fusion Material including both of those Attribute. And if you do, the Summoned monster gain ATK equal to the total Level of the Fusion Materials x100

Ana'Ghar DEF is too powerful. Even if its a normal monster, in fact because he is a Level 4 Normal Monster it can be summoned straight from the deck with Unexpected Dai or any powerful normal support, if i remember correctly, the highest level 4 normal monster DEF stat is around 2100 so this card  should be around that number

Worm of Eclipse is a wording mess, but assuming the effects literally, then the card is also kinda overpower. It boost Ana'Ghar to 2500 and prevent player to Summon monster other than light,dark, or earth. Effect that prevent summon is rare in this game and usually either slow, expensive, or only prevent certain types of summon instead of them all like this card does

You edit Obeliks from Xyz into reguler effect monster without any difficult summon method its actually making it slightly more powerful. I dont think i can recall any level 7 monster with 4000 ATK in any irl card. But other than that the effect is still too specific and underwhelming

But unlike Obeliks, Burns actually become genuine threat despite having same trait. Im not sure this level of power is fair, despite being Level 7 its actually a generic level 7 that can be summoned by any card in the game (Monster Reborn or any card effect) usually a card this power its limited by its own summon condition

Redro already summarize Scorpius neatly