Yankee Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 Well, I have decided to creat a new card. I hope you enjoy it. When this card is Normal Summoned, switch this card with 1 of your Spell or Trap cards on the field. The Spell or Trap card is treated as a monster (Beast-Type/EARTH/Level 4/ATK 1800/DEF 500) and this card is treated as an equip card equipped to that card. If the equipped card is attacked while face-down, you can activate it's effect as if it were a Spell or Trap card. If you use this effect, double any damage you take in a battle involving this card. When the equipped card is destroyed, Special Summon this card to your side of the field. When this card is Special Summoned this way, as long as this card remains face-up on the field, all monsters your opponent controls gain 500 ATK. If this card is attacked by a monster with 2000 ATK or more, inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the Level of the attacking monster x 200 Please rate and comment ^_^ Cheers,Yankeefan ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
notsohandyman Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 Uh.....this card as a big effect...You might want to tune it down... 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 I do believe that that is the smallest text I have ever seen. The card is nearly perfect. The one thing, and I may be wrong about this, but when it says If this card is attacked by a monster with 2000 ATK or more, shouldn't it be 2000 or more ATK? 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted May 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 LOLApparently, you don't know me.I always use big effects.Also, I wrote the stuff down, so you can read it. And as for having too much text...umm, there are many cards that have longer effects. I find it suprising that a person can get rated badly for having too long of an effect. Thanks for your anway... EDIT: Thanks viris. Ummm, ask Browarod on that. I asked him, and thats how he said that is worded. lolThanks for the rate ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 The card is nearly perfect. Yankee, easily your best. I'm in awe of the creativity that it took to make the card. Great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Max Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 Okay! As I promised you over IM Here's a indepth review of the card :P So when this Monster is Normal Summoned it's Automaticly switched with a Spell or Trap card of your choice and the chosen card becomes a 1800/500 Monster. That's great and all but do you lose the effect of the Chosen Spell or Trap? The whole "Attack Equipped Monster While face down" Face down monsters cannot be Equipped. Then there is the effect when it is Special Summoned to the Field after being destroyed. It's nice that Your Opponent gets a 500 ATK boost to all his monsters but then there is a catch. If a Monster attacks with 2000 ATK or more then they take a hit. That is balance. 7/10 But because I like you 8.5/10 Sort out that Face down thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted May 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 The card is nearly perfect. Yankee' date=' [b']easily your best.[/b] I'm in awe of the creativity that it took to make the card. Great job. Thank you VERY much for the rate! ^_^But, my best? Thanks, but, I reccomend you look at my other cards before you say that ;)But, I won't deny that it's likeable xDAgain, thanks for the rate man ^_^I'm glad you like it ^_^ EDIT: thanks DMG ^_^I realise that I did screw up there with the part about face down being equipped, but, I did the best I could do ;)Thanks for the in depth review there. I apriciate it ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 Okay! As I promised you over IM Here's a indepth review of the card :P So when this Monster is Normal Summoned it's Automaticly switched with a Spell or Trap card of your choice and the chosen card becomes a 1800/500 Monster. That's great and all but do you lose the effect of the Chosen Spell or Trap? The whole "Attack Equipped Monster While face down" Face down monsters cannot be Equipped. Then there is the effect when it is Special Summoned to the Field after being destroyed. It's nice that Your Opponent gets a 500 ATK boost to all his monsters but then there is a catch. If a Monster attacks with 2000 ATK or more then they take a hit. That is balance. 7/10 But because I like you 8.5/10 Sort out that Face down thing. I think he means if the Spell or Trap card was set it is still face down in the monster card zone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HelioSpark Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 I really like it, and @notsohandyman: Having a long effect isn't a downfall as long as it is organized, well thought out, and balanced, which his is. overall 9.5/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kei-kun Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 Good effect and stuff plus its real balanced. However, you made a few OCG errors. change equip card to equipped monster and you'll be set. Nice Job Dude! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted May 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 @ Deswombat thanks alot man. I always make long effects, it's wierd for me not to. Thanks for the rate man ^_^ And, thanks alot for the rate man, though, I am pretty sure the ocg/grammar is correct, but i'll check it out, thanks ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antiinferno Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 tl;dr lol111!!!one -1/10 ¬_¬ Now that my sarcasm directed at lazy readers is out of the way... Really neat card! I'd have one if it was real ^_^ 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted May 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Sweet, thanks for the rate man ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 perfection at its peekamaizingive seen that image beforebut never seen used on a card like thisbravo yankeebravo!!!10-10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Millenium Mike Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 This is neat! The effect is so long that your opponent might just surrender so he doesn't have to read it all, lol jk. Anyways... I like this card. Your opponent would be kept in constant surprise by the intricate effects of this card and confusing your opponent is halfway to defeating them.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted May 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Wow, thanks Gphaku ^_^I'm glad everybody likes this.Thanks everybody ^_^ I think I am officially returning to card making xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HelioSpark Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Yay! Yankee will make more cards!!!:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Max Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 WOOHOO! Yanks why don't you enter my Spellcaster Organization then? Between you and me with talents like this I can see you are clearly worthy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Equip Spell Card* I'ma pull a Frunk here. Name: 9.5/10Originality: 9.5/10Creativity: 9.5/10OCG: 9.4/10Image: 9.3/10 47.2/50 94% A This card is better than Omega Dragon. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted May 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 lol,OMFGFor once, you actually say a card is better than omega, lolThanks ^_^ BTW, Deswombat, lol, yeah, i'll make more cards soon.And DMG, sure, i'll check it out ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dramatic Crossroad Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Looks like some people can wield creativity power ! 9.8/10... ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted May 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 ^ umm, what exactly does the first part mean?Anyway, yay, thanks for the rate! I'm glad i'm getting such good rates from people. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thecards1234567890 Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Nice card.8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted May 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Ummm, thanks ^_^But, would you like to say a rate and why you like it?BTW, welcome to ycm, I see that is your first post. I hope you enjoy your stay here ^_^ BTW: 5750, woo? lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Not too bad...a tiny bit overpowered for a 3 star but none the less good, some small OCG errors here and there but nobody is perfect. And one more little thing to add...even though equip cards can't be equipped to face-down monsters...it is a slightly different concept since it is being equipped to a spell/trap card and even if that same principle of it not being able to equip to a face-down card applies, the principle of being able to do so can always be a special concept that only applies to certain cards such as this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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