Umbra Posted August 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2008 That seems to be the problem with my fanfics, in terms of publicity. Some people read, but don't comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted September 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 6, 2008 Late update is late. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted September 6, 2008 Report Share Posted September 6, 2008 Glad at least you updated your Fanfic, I still can't organize my ideas for Final Light. Loki, huh? Well, guess that makes sense, since you're from Sweden. *Sigh* Still no quotation marks. Better just deal with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted September 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 6, 2008 Quotation marks just ain't my thing. But thanks anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted September 7, 2008 Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 Like your use of the wolf cards. What does Hailstorm Wolf do, though? I didn't see it in the card thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted September 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 Hailstorm is one of them new cards. Hailstorm WolfEARTHBeast / Synchro6 / 2500 / 21001 Tuner monster + 1 or more "Wolf" non-Tuner monstersThis card gains 400 ATK for each Beast-type monster in your Graveyard. Once per turn, you can send 1 Beast-type monster from your Deck to your Graveyard. If you do, your opponent draws 1 card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted September 7, 2008 Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 Wow, awesome fanfic. A couple of things. Karen frowned, then went back into the bedroom and pulled the curtains apart. A brilliant sunlight filled the room, and Lucas moaned in his sleep, then turned over. Karen frowned, Seems a bit soon to use "Person" frowned. Maybe say '"still frowning", or "Karen frowned again"? He almost tackled her as they jumped into the bed, where they kissed for long. "Where they kissed for long" sounded a bit odd... Possibly "where they kissed for a long time"? That's my two cents. Anyway, awesome job! a simply lovely story to read, especially with the little... oh what are they called, snippets or something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted September 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2008 You're right, they do sound better. Edited. And the snippets may be of more importance than you think... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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