Cyber Altair Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 [align=center]Arethous, Shadow of Armagedon Inspiration from "Land of Confusion ~ Disturbed". Felt compeled to do something after VainZiler took the time to come back, requesting that wasn't really that hard lol but just so we are equal. Thanks for the OCG help Vain. Effect-This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 5 monsters from your hand and/or field. Increase the card's ATK by 100 for every Pyro-Type Monster sent to the Graveyard this way. If your opponent has more then 2 face-down cards on his side of the field then discard 1 card from your hand to destroy 1 face-down card on the field. Enjoyz.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 Glad to aid a friend and fellow card maker, though Land of Confusion originally wasn't Disturbed's property. I already gave my thoughts on the card, nice work on it, the effects balance better now then when I got the first draft. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
waza-b Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 hmmm, its not a fire type, dosent resemble a pyro either Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted July 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 i know, i tried mixing both together. Give's it a nice twist. anyway thanks guys, and Vain ya you told me that...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 Should probably be a Winged Beast. Pretty good card otherwise. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 Pyro? Dark?Doesn't make sense...Try fixing it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Master Ygo Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 nice card and pic but you forgot her lik his/her on your card. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyfi Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 Looks Good To Me! ^_^ Keep Up The Good Work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HellKaiserofDarkness Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 Should probably be a Winged Beast. Pretty good card otherwise. 8/10 fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted July 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 lol, anyway thanks guys. As for the dark and pyro it was meant to be so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enigma Zero Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 The only thing I see wrong with this card is that there are 2 d's in Armageddon. Other than that...it's a nice card. I understand why you chose Dark and Pyro and I know your graphical abilities so I can easily make this suggestion. Add more dark red to the background to make the image fit the overall feel of the card. As it stands now...it looks too much like a Light Monster. Maybe do some kind of a flames holo too. I hope this helps. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted July 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 well actually the image was made by wolf and i like it for a reason. Darkness often refers to cruelty, so it's dark, and this cruelty is the only thing which can bring light back to our universe, therefore it's shows the irony of how that it's the "dark" forces that will bring "light" and peace to the universe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enigma Zero Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 Heck, that's more of an answer than I was expecting. You win. :D Now you just need to correct the typo...unless there's a story there as well. :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted July 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 yes, actually there is. wanna hear it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted July 13, 2008 Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 I like it. 9.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted July 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 thanks man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted July 13, 2008 Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 Effect doesn't make sense, and tell me the story behind "Armagedon". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted July 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 The Almighty God of Mudkipz wanted to send down his message about the existence of Armageddon in the form of a yogayuh card. And isn't it strange that's it's only you who has this problem? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted July 13, 2008 Report Share Posted July 13, 2008 1) ...fix the typo. >_>2) Yes, it is. Maybe other people don't have a particularly good reading comprehension. I mean, it makes sense, but the second sentence is pointless. Anyway, I'll make some OCG fixes after your reply. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted July 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 go ahead make some, i'd like to get back in the game :p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FindingTheEverlight Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 I see a few grammatical errors, but other than that, fab concept, 14/15 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 nice 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 go ahead make some' date=' i'd like to get back in the game :p[/quote']By reply, I meant fix the 2 things I'd already pointed out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 this card attribute and type selection is wrongOne this looks like a angel or a ghost so either dark or light typeTwo It looks like a angel so it could be winged beast, fairy or fiend type.Remember the types also should be chosen on the name as well as the picture.Effect wise i think yous hould improve if this is a basic draft card it's leaves a good set of foundations to improve, meh it's good but could be better.8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted July 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 mmmm... NO. dude, just because it's an angel doesn't mean it can't be a pyro. 2nd if you gonna rate a card please use spellcheck at least. i'm too lazy >.< plus i can't be bothered to fix everything i do... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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