DarkAngel_XD_070695 Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 here are some new cards i jst made no OCG errors jst like my other ones...jst comment pic, effect, overall card...and if its rly bad plse give me some tips! Thanks! [align=center][/align][align=center]If you could help me find a better pic for my Fire Form that woudl be awsome! Thanks![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FindingTheEverlight Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 I see some overused pics and you need to capitalize things such as "Normal Summon" Other than that, I see you grasp the concept of card making, and this is a really good card set, 12/15 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 earth form shoud be earth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkAngel_XD_070695 Posted July 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 I see some overused pics and you need to capitalize things such as "Normal Summon" Other than that' date=' I see you grasp the concept of card making, and this is a really good card set, 12/15[/quote']thanks for the rate ^^ this is the first good card set i've ever made...i have a new Elemental Dragon's one comin out jst to give u a heads up u might wanna check them out! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 VERY bad OCG and UDT, Light Form, and Dark Form all have overused pics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkAngel_XD_070695 Posted July 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 VERY bad OCG and UDT' date=' Light Form, and Dark Form all have overused pics.[/quote'] okay thanks for the warning...my OCG is bad...so its not actually my fault i'm new to this -__-" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BLUE EYES RULER Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 effects aren't written right but cool idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 I could fix the OCG, but you would have to change the name "Lucius". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkAngel_XD_070695 Posted July 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 I could fix the OCG' date=' but you would have to change the name "Lucius".[/quote'] okay but change it to what?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 I don't know, but it can't have the name Lucius. Maybe Siegfried or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 Same as your other cards, you need to work on that OCG! Just pay attention to how the cards are written, and recognize certain phrases used alot in the cards. These are interesting, but the set itself is overpowered. Summon the first lucius and then you can get all the others. You should state where they come from, like from the hand deck or graveyard... I rate this one 6.8/10. And I am always ready to help when needed. ^_^ I am happy you asked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 Few overused pics. Not a bad set. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonRoyale Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 Unoriginal pics. Dragon Tamer:"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by discarding 1 Level 2 or higher Dragon-Type monster. While you control this face-up card, you can Special Summon 1 "Lucius" monster from your hand. Increase the ATK of this card by 300 for each Dragon-Type monster on the field." Earth Form:"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Lucius - Ultimate Dragon Tamer". For each Spell and Trap Card in your hand, this card gains 500 ATK/DEF. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, add 1 "Lucius" monster from your Deck to your hand." Water Form:1600 ATK."This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Lucius - Ultimate Dragon Tamer". All WATER monsters gain 800 ATK/DEF." Light Form:Level 8."This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by controlling 1 "Lucius - Ultimate Dragon Tamer" and 2 or more Dragon-Type monsters. All Dragon-Type monsters gain 500 ATK/DEF." Dark Form:Great pic.Level 8."This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Lucius - Ultimate Dragon Tamer". All "Lucius" monsters, except "Lucius - Dark Form" gain 800 ATK/DEF. Discard 1 Spell or Trap Card from your hand to destroy 1 monster on the field." Fire Form:"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Lucius - Ultimate Dragon Tamer". By discarding 1 Spell or Trap Card, this card can attack your opponent directly this turn. In that case, apply half the ATK of this card for damage calculation." 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 Overused pics....*sigh*^^Agree with comments from above. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkAngel_XD_070695 Posted July 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 Thanks for the tips and help to every one whose helped me inprove my OCG!! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TR_Headshot Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 DON'T POST SPAM ON OTHER PEOPLE'S THREADS NOOB! EVERY TIME! Cards-8.5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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