Lazer Yoshi Posted July 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 2nd post? :lol: Glad you like the card that much! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 nice card man well done for joining the 5 star club!and plus sorry to say this but i can't see a beatle in the pic9.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted July 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 The beetle is on the right shooting fire. I called it Metallica since it was metal. Thanks for the rating ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 kool cardi say 9.7/10 congrats on gettin 1000My only tip is not to stop posting yea.. true, just dont spam in the process ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bazzabaz Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 congratzNice card, could be machine, but that doesn't make much difference...9/10XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CinnamonStar Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Congratulations to your 5th star, Lazerman!:D You deserve it because I think you're a decent card maker and one of the friendliest, yet less popular members here.This is actually a balanced and quite original card, especially because it is a DARK Insect-Type monster, which is something I've never come across in the real Trading Card Game. I still discovered a couple of OCG errors, though:*) This monster can only be Special Summoned (I suppose it's a typing mistake) by Tributing 3 Insect-Type monsters on your field. -->Side or field aren't capitalized and according to the new OCG, you don't need to mention the side part anymore.*) Increase the ATK of this card by 500 points for every Insect-Type monster on the field, except for this card. The same capitalization issue counts for "removing", "play", hand", "this effect's activation" (better: the activation of this effect), "used" and "once".*) By removing 1 Insect-Type monster...*) ...in Face-Up Defense Position(ignoring Summoning Conditions). -->better: while ignoring the Summoning conditions On a whole this is a decent card with an useful and balanced effect, but you should work on your OCG, especially the capitalization issues. This makes a 7.5/10.I hope you will continue making this forum a nice place with your friendliness^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Very good idea. Congrats on 5 stars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted July 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Thanks Goldshine and Raven:D I know about the Capping problems, it just seems formal Ill try to stop if possible. But I think Im gonna stick with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Congratulations to your 5th star' date=' Lazerman!:D You deserve it because I think you're a decent card maker and one of the friendliest, yet less popular members here.This is actually a balanced and quite original card, especially because it is a DARK Insect-Type monster, which is something I've never come across in the real Trading Card Game. I still discovered a couple of OCG errors, though:*) This [b']m[/b]onster can only be Special Summoned (I suppose it's a typing mistake) by Tributing 3 Insect-Type monsters on your field. -->Side or field aren't capitalized and according to the new OCG, you don't need to mention the side part anymore.*) Increase the ATK of this card by 500 points for every Insect-Type monster on the field, except for this card. The same capitalization issue counts for "removing", "play", hand", "this effect's activation" (better: the activation of this effect), "used" and "once".*) By removing 1 Insect-Type monster...*) ...in Face-Up Defense Position(ignoring Summoning Conditions). -->better: while ignoring the Summoning conditions On a whole this is a decent card with an useful and balanced effect, but you should work on your OCG, especially the capitalization issues. This makes a 7.5/10.I hope you will continue making this forum a nice place with your friendliness^.^ I thank you too for the perfect analysation.I give 7/10, don't like the pic too much.Gongrats with your Elite status, guy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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