Midknight Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 Yo, I'm atempting to create a set called The Lost civilization. So far I have a few cards cooked up take a look and rate/comment to your hearts content. -All monsters on your opponents side of the field are switched to defense mode for their next 2 turns -Pay 500 life points. Downgrade all cards with "The Lost" in their names by 2 levels -Discard this card to return Sacrificial Lamb from the field to your hand. Gain 1000 life points -When this card is Normal Summoned,Flip Summoned,or Special Summoned Deal 200 points of damage to your opponent for every Trap and Magic card on the field -When this card is Flip Summoned,Special Summoned or Normal Summoned destroy 1 Magic Card and place 1 Shaman Token on your opponents side of the field (100/100). When this card is destroyed in battle deal 500 damage for every Shaman Token -When this card is summoned,both you and your opponent discard your hand. This card then gains 500 life points for every card with the "The Lost" in it's name in your graveyard. *Edited OCG on two of them* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 Not too bad for a new member. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 What DeMeNTeD said. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Midknight Posted July 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 ThanksI try. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=aTaLiG= Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 not bad...i like it...:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 These are very good. Especially for a new member. 8.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silverlighted Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 Pretty nice cards so far. lol, The Lost Heretic is pretty fine, set your cards, summon it, say byebye to opponent's hand, lol. Shame Call of the Haunted is banned...haha Your ocg (official card grammar) is kinda mixed. Aside from a few problems, you have pretty good ocg. It's just, for some of your cards, the effect is kind of ambigious; wording is a bit rushed. For instance, the Lost Scout Walker's effect is unclear regarding when it actually activates. Lost Heretic, I think, gets an atk gain? Maybe clean up the wording there a bit. So, overall, I like them. The pictures are really cool, and the effect's pretty good. Just tidy up some wording and you're all set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Midknight Posted July 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 once again thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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