Ypower Posted July 17, 2008 Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 WHAT DO U THINK (LOOKING FOR OCG HELP) The Tentacled Snow Beast The Giant Snow Beast Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloud99 Posted July 17, 2008 Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 nice cards.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted July 17, 2008 Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 Capitalise Graveyard like so. Also change "when this card is Flip Summoned Sucessfully, destroy all monsters on your opponents's side of the field with original ATK points lower than this cards DEF" to "when this card is Flip Summoned, destroy all monsters on your opponent's side of the field with an original ATK less than the original DEF of this card." I'm pretty sure thats correct. The first one looks fine to me. Balance looks good. Overall, pretty good. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neiko Posted July 17, 2008 Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 Well, well pretty original cards^^Make the fixes that Gold made and they should look fine.I like the pic choice but i dislike the first name....Pretty good 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KOREAN2 Posted July 17, 2008 Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 As usual OCG errors but minor this time,and as usual Very nice pics 8/10 keep it up +1 poss.rep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 17, 2008 Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 Pics: GoodOCG: Ok, couple errorsBalance: Ok8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bazzabaz Posted July 17, 2008 Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 Good cards... like the picz!On the second card, where do you send the cards to the graveyard from?It doesn't specify on card text... you could send them from your deck or hand, then this card would be overpowered.Also you don't need to say ATK "points", just ATK or DEF!you also use numbers e.g: "2" not "two" First card seems to be OCG perfect! 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted July 17, 2008 Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 Very nice images! On the first card I'm not sure if there should be a "the" in the middle of "on" and "top", but I think it should be there. Second one has already been explained. 8/10, I like em! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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