Saturn of Elemia Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 Hello everyone. I have a new set for you to rate/hate/comment. I am really proud of this set because I created a unique new mechanic and a subtype to match it - Visionary. These monsters allow you to discard a card when they are Normal Summoned. If your opponent destroys them other than by battle, you can remove the discarded card from play to return the monster to your field. The good news is that the monster that just came back gets an added effect. The idea is that the monsters are offering tribute in order to "see the future" and prepare for it accordingly (which would be their bonus effects). Without further ado: VOTF-021 through VOTF-040 are new additions Here are the effects of cards that may be hard to read: VOTF-003 Selena the Dark VisionaryWhen this card is Tribute Summoned, you can discard 1 Monster Card from your hand. When this card is destroyed by an opponent's card effect, you can remove the discarded card from play to Special Summon this card to your field. If this card is Special Summoned this way, your opponent sends the top 2 cards of their Deck to the Graveyard. VOTF-006 Visionary of the Clear WatersWhen this card is Normal Summoned, you can discard 1 WATER monster from your hand. When this card is destroyed by an opponent's card effect, you can remove the discarded card from play to Special Summon this card to your field. If this card is Special Summoned this way, Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower WATER monster from your hand in face-up Defense Position. VOTF-008 Koruchi the Cosmic VisionaryWhen this card is Tribute Summoned, you can discard 1 Monster Card from your hand. When this card is destroyed by an opponent's card effect, you can remove the discarded card from play to Special Summon this card to your field. If this card is Special Summoned this way, destroy all monsters on the field whose Level is equal to the Level of the removed card. VOTF-011 Moonlight VisionaryWhen this card is Normal Summoned, you can discard 1 Monster Card from your hand. When this card is destroyed by an opponent's card effect, you can remove the discarded card from play to Special Summon this card to your field. If this card is Special Summoned this way, take control of 1 face-up monster on your opponent's field whose Level is equal to the Level of the removed card. VOTF-012 Shining Archangel VisionaryWhen this card is Normal Summoned, you can discard 1 FIRE monster from your hand. When this card is destroyed by an opponent's card effect, you can remove the discarded card from play to Special Summon this card to your field. If this card is Special Summoned this way, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the Level of the removed card x 200. VOTF-014 Vision of the DesertThis card can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 Visionary monster in your Graveyard from play. When this card is Special Summoned, you can discard 1 card from your hand. When this card is destroyed by an opponent's card effect, you can remove the discarded card from play to Special Summon this card to your field. If this card is Special Summoned this way, change the Battle Positions of all your opponent's face-up monsters to Defense Position. VOTF-016 Jelanda the High VisionaryThis card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 3 Visionary monsters in your Graveyard from play. The original ATK and DEF of this card are both equal to the Total Levels of the removed monsters x 300. When this card is Special Summoned, you can discard 1 Spell Card from your hand. If this card is destroyed by an opponent's card effect, you can activate the discarded Spell Card, ignoring its condition(s) for activation. VOTF-020 Xeonzhix the Celestial VisionaryThis card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 6 different Spell and Trap Cards with "Vision" in their card name in your Graveyard from play. Increase the ATK of this monster by 100 for each Visionary monster removed from play. When this card is Special Summoned, remove all cards in your Graveyard from play. Negate the effect(s) of Effect Monsters destroyed by this card by battle. VOTF-021 Alchemic VisionaryWhen this card is Normal Summoned, you can discard 1 Monster Card from your hand. When this card is destroyed by an opponent's card effect, you can remove the discarded monster from play to Special Summon this card to your field. If this card is Special Summoned this way, Special Summon 1 "Vision Token". The "Vision Token" has the same Level, Type, Attribute, ATK, and DEF as the removed monster. Destroy the "Vision Token' during the End Phase of your turn. VOTF-023 Enlighened Paladin1 Tuner Monster + 1 Visionary Monster + 1 or more non-Tuner MonstersWhen this card is Syncho Summoned, you can discard 1 Monster Card from your hand. When this card is destroyed by an opponent's card effect, you can remove the discarded monster from play to Special Summon this monster to your field. If this card is Special Summoned this way, this card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. VOTF-028 Crimson Blader Visionary1 Tuner Monster + 1 Visionary Monster + 1 or more non-Tuner MonstersWhen this card is Synchro Summoned, you can discard 1 card from your hand. When this card is destroyed by an opponent's card effect, you can remove the discarded card from play to Special Summon this card to your field. If this card is Special Summoned this way, you can add 1 card from your Deck that is the same type as the removed card. VOTF-030 Jeanne the Divine Warrior"Apprentice Visionary" + "Enlightened Paladin" + "Shining Archangel Visionary"This card can only be Fusion Summoned with the above Fusion Material Monsters. When this card is Fusion Summoned, you can discard up to 2 Monster Cards from your hand. When this card is destroyed by an opponent's card effect, you can remove the discarded card(s) from play to Special Summon this card to your field. If this card is Special Summoned this way, you can Special Summon the removed monsters to your field. VOTF-039 Cursed Traitor of Enlightenment"Apprentice Visionary" + "Vengeful Maide of Chaos" + Moonlight Visionary"This card can only be Fusion Summoned with the above Fusion Material Monsters. When this card is Fusion Summoned, you can discard up to 3 Monster Cards from your hand. When this card is destroyed by an opponent's card effect, you can remove the discarded monster(s) from play to Special Summon this card to the field. If this card is Special Summoned this way, destroy 1 monster on your opponent's field for each monster removed. Please lemme know whatcha think. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 wow... i am simply just ashamed of my work!! you are truly an amazing card maker!! if u want me to give you a rating for an individual card PM me.. WOW!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted July 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 Do not feel ashamed of your works! Your cards are just as good. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 not even close!!! you really shoulda joined the contest im holdin.. its too late now but next time!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 1 flaw, if the name of cards is visionary, make the subtype diffrent or vice versa, takes kale's allies for exmpale subtype = ally, name for most = legion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Max Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 *Stares* Fantastic..... Just Plain Fantastic! You are coming such a long way as a Card Maker. Be sure to keep this up! And yep you now have the J-Max's Blessing, Be proud! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TR_Headshot Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 Sweet cards! (As always) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.D Star-Storm Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 wow my cards suck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted July 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 That makes sense. I guess these monsters are just proud to call themselves "Visionaries". :D I will keep that advice in mind if I decide to make another subtype. AND FOR THE LAST TIME, NOBODY'S CARDS SUCK!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 maybe they could be Tellers XD or maybe they could be diffrent archtypes within the subtype ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted July 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 I dunno. Tellers just doesn't feel right. :( I do appreciate your advice. I am going to remember it for the next subtype I make. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 Pics: GoodOCG: GoodBalance: Ok9.75/10 good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonRoyale Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 Betrayal of Trust and Lonely Existence each should require 500 Life Points to play. (In the case of Lonely Existence, it should be 500 per card.) Aside from that, there is nothing wrong with this at all.The game mechanic is amazing, easy to execute, and fun. 9.99/10, because of the minor balance problems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tom_legend Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 great set but i noticed that the picture from vision of the desert is a dragon card from magic the gathering. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hatchetman_354 Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 10/10 AWSOME Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted July 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Thanks for all your comments! It means a lot. I'm wondering if I can make another set that will ever come close to this. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killer800 Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 man u rule wicked bet that took u a while 10 / 10 good luck with ur next set :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rusty Shovel Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 *Jaw drops* WOW! i love the idea. 10/10. just looking at these makes me notice how much my cards SUCK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xemba Posted August 1, 2008 Report Share Posted August 1, 2008 I like them all except for Vision - Lonely Existence. With all the swarm out there nowadays this could easily be a draw 3-5 cards. Also Maiden of the Black Roses doesn't seem to go with the flow, was this meant to be a side deck card for visionary? And what's up with the discarding a fire or water attribute. The fire one doesn't work as a Volcanic tech so I don't really see the combo there. Overall though nice set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted August 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2008 The set has been updated with new cards and a poll. I hope you enjoy them. These are the finest cards I have made so far. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rusty Shovel Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 PM for any ones you want Holoed I work fast and free. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted August 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 The card "Apprentice Visionary" has been updated. It is now been modified into a Tuner Monster to better compliment the Synchro Visionaries. Enjoy. 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xemba Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 I just realized that Vision - Betrayal of Trust will work if you have no face-up monsters and the spell or trap will simply go to the graveyard. That's deffinetly a nice splashable card + the obvious visionary tech. Also I like those cards to remove from play now especially the draw 1 card one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted August 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 There could be more in the future. 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 These are excellent. Sorry I didnt comment sooner. 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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