TR_Headshot Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Master Ygo Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 umm.... maybe you should write:When this card is Advance Summoned successfully, you may discard 2 monster cards from your hand to destroy 2 cards on your opponent's side of the field. By removing this card in your Graveyard from play, draw 1 card.for me thats what ill write but then 5.4/10 the pic is blurry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silverlighted Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 I think you're supposed to use "when" instead of "if". And you don't have to use tribute; discard should suffice.I like the effect, two monsters is a lot to chuck just doestry one card, but I can see that helping some decks. And the draw 1 ability is a nice touch.I wish it were 2400 atk though.... As for the picture, I really like what you chose, but the image quality leaves much to be desired. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 dont tell me you enter this for the monarch contest..*sigh*monarchs dont need "sucessfully"....form hand, its discard.. not tributeall monarchs' atks are 2400 and defs 1000 so far.. if your gonna keep this in the monarch class4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 I like it. Grammar problem, good pic and effect. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TR_Headshot Posted July 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 blurry pic, over powered, monarchs do need successfully Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superbull Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Ok card but a bad pic 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TR_Headshot Posted July 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 It's supposed to be blurry it's his force being exerted on the gravity and heat ETC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Whats Advance Summoned?Good Card by the way, clever effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Master Ygo Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 sorry but 5/10DuelOnX: REad Dj's OCG Thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Learn your OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 DuelOnX: Advance Summoned will be the new way of saying Tribute Summoned once new sets come out. umm.... maybe you should write:When this card is Advance Summoned successfully' date=' you may discard 2 monster cards from your hand to destroy 2 cards on your opponent's side of the field. By removing this card in your Graveyard from play, draw 1 card.[/b']for me thats what ill write but then 5.4/10 the pic is blurry Umm, maybe he shouldn't because saying stuff like "may", "Summoned successfully" (that's why Caius and Kuraz don't say "successfully, it's outdated now), and "removing this card in your Graveyard from play" is wrong. You can't discard Monster Cards or any other specific type of card either, you have to send t from your hand to the Graveyard, check Zombie Master 'N stuff. This should work for ya: When this card is Advanced Summoned, you can send 1 Monster Card from your hand to the Graveyard to destroy 2 cards your opponent controls. When this card is destroyed, remove it from play to draw 1 card. I like the pic. ^_^ Nice card. Atomix: Don't spam. Here at YCM we disaprove of spamming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blach golf Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Pretty good overall. Picture is a little blurry. Monarchs still get their effects if the get summoned. Sucessfully is unecessary. I say 6.5/10. Picture needs to be better and OCG needs a little work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 pic is blurry some errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Good idea, but OCG does need a little work. The pic could be better too. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TR_Headshot Posted July 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 I know, I'm working on my OCG as we speak. Thanks for the support and honesty you guys! I might look for a better picture but it's not that important, I have new cards to make. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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