J-Max Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 [align=center]Um.... *Blushes* It's not often I ask you all for some OCG advice but well this is that time. This card is based on the premise of if your monster is destroyed in battle, you can Special Summon a Monster by removing Spell Counters from the field. Well here we go.Image from a Hentai SiteThis card can only be activated if you control at least 1 monster with a Spell Counter on it and when a monster is sent from the field to your Graveyard. Remove Spell Counters from your field equal to the Level of a monster from your hand, Deck or Graveyard and Special Summon the monster in face-up Attack Position, and increase the ATK and DEF of the monster by 500.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 excellent use of spell counters & wonderful too9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Max Posted July 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 The OCG is far from Perfect :P But i'm happy you understand the effect :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DivineRite Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Nice idea. Good effect. Here's how I would word it (doesn't necessarily mean that it's correct):"This card can only be activated if a monster was destroyed in battle, and you control at least 1 card with a Spell Counter on it. Remove Spell Counters on your side of the field equal to the level of the destroyed monster to Special Summon the monster from the Graveyard in face-up attack position and equip it with this card. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, the selected monster gains 500 ATK & DEF. When the equipped monster is destroyed, destroy this card. When this card is destroyed, destroy the equipped monster." That's a bit long for an effect, I don't know how small the text will be. But, that's the best way I can word it with correct OCG, without making it too confusing. So, if you want, give that a shot, and edit the card. Or not. Up to you. I'll give it a nice 9/10 because all of my cards deal with Spell Counters. So I can see the use for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 I think this is better than yours... "This card can only be activated if you control at least 1 monster with a Spell Counter on it and when a monster is sent from the field to your Graveyard. Remove Spell Counters from your field equal to the Level of a monster from your Hand, Deck or Graveyard and Special Summon the monster in face-up Attack Position and increase the ATK and DEF of the monster by 500." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Max Posted July 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Thanks Guys! I'm going to go with Alim's Idea. That looks so good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DivineRite Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Oh, my mistake. You're right. I mis-read the card text. I read it as you can Special Summon the monster from the Graveyard. Not as Special Summon any monster. So, you're right, I'm wrong. Still, a very nice card. My rating stands. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 This card is CUTE!!! I have an idea of how this could be worded: This card can only be activated when a monster with a Spell Counter on it is destroyed by battle. Remove any number of Spell Counters from your field to Special Summon 1 monster from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard whose Level is equal to the number of Spell Counters removed. When the monster is Special Summoned, treat this card as an Equip Spell Card and equip it to the monster. Increase the ATK and DEF of the equipped monster by 500. Granted, it's wordy. I'm still rating this card a 9.5/10! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 I have to say that I realise a pattern with your recent cards.The card pictures are all from Hentai Sites & you have choosen wisely to use only those that are viewable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Max Posted July 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Not bad Paladin. But I was actually planning for it to be ANY Monster destroyed in battle and 1 on the field with a Spell Counter. Thanks for the Rating and Advice though.EDIT: Of course Raviel :P I promise you it IS a Hentai site though. I would give the Links but I hear from some people that there is Pop Ups and Hentai Ads. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neiko Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Yes.Excellent.Are pictures always this cute where you get them? ^^ It seems you have used Spell counters a lot lately or is it just me?Probly me because i'm uber tired... Anyway 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Max Posted July 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Yeah Poke. I work with Themes that are underused. Tokens & Counters are my latest project. Also the fact I love making effects from them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 um okwhy do you have two cards? one with horrible OCG mistakes, and the other with a rookie OCG mistake? hand isnt capitalized>_>ATK is used when talking about the actualy number >_>you never use & for and Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Max Posted July 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 I always have 2 the first is my own and the second was a redone one. I will correct those mistakes. Thank you Bloodrun. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 ooops my bad on the Hand one, yeah use 'hand' instead.And the last 2 lines seem too long, im not sure how to re-word it though.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 I always have 2 the first is my own and the second was a redone one. I will correct those mistakes. Thank you Bloodrun. hmmheres my opinion.show not what you did wrong.but yet, what you did right.and your welcome ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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