lordares25 Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 here is the mirror force of my set. card text: negate the attack of an attacking monster. also the attacker will take the attack damage of the attacking monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bringer Of The Apocalypse Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 OCG, it's basically Magic Cylinder. Eh, 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LightAndDarknessDragon Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 As stated above, OCG and originality is a problem here. This has nothing to do with Dragons. And try to find a more detailed picture. It's boring. 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 OCG is way off. Originality is also off. Picture could also be better. 2/10. You can do better than that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Pic: Could be betterOCG: See Dj's OCG threadBalance: Overpowered4/10 Srry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Its far from overpowered. Its like a Magic Cylinder. Magic Cylinder is bad outside of burn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lordares25 Posted July 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 i respect everyones opinion. it gives me input. thanks all :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Metal Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 your OCG needs work. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Since it's basically Magical Cylinder this is what it should say: Negate the attack of 1 of your opponent's monsters and inflict damage equal to the attacking monster's ATK to your opponent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Grammar problems, effect is a little overpowered, pic can be better. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lordares25 Posted July 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 OCG' date=' it's basically Magic Cylinder. Eh, 5/10[/quote'] i realized that when i first made this card it had a word mispelled so when i remade it i forgot to add "negate the attack of the attacking monster and destroy the attacking monster" and also deal damage equal to the ttacking monster. i know its not proper OCG format and i will remember that when i make new cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSBB Fan Posted July 20, 2008 Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 Well, at least you're getting it :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aouros Posted July 20, 2008 Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 3/10 ^^see above^^ Also, attack should be ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted July 20, 2008 Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 Copy of Magic Cyclinder. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wolfman Sam Posted July 20, 2008 Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 wow thats really just sad even for a noob like me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted July 20, 2008 Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 wow thats really just sad even for a noob like me You mean newb Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted July 20, 2008 Report Share Posted July 20, 2008 Here guys maybe this will help clarify things about noobs and newbs: "Newbs are those who are new to some task* and are very beginner at it, possibly a little overconfident about it, but they are willing to learn and fix their errors to move out of that stage. n00bs, on the other hand, know little and have no will to learn any more. They expect people to do the work for them and then expect to get praised about it, and make up a unique species of their own." Extracted from urban dictionary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lordares25 Posted July 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2008 i know when i posted the card i didnt knotice that one part of the effect was missing so here is the corrected card. with the effect i meant to have on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thunderfang12 Posted July 21, 2008 Report Share Posted July 21, 2008 ocg could be better ok pic a combo of Sakerutsu Armour + Magic Cylinder 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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