Exyst Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 [align=center]Feel free to rate/hate/fix. I do NOT own the image. [spoiler=Card Lore]Select 1 face-up Dragon-Type monster on the field. When this card is activated, place it face-up on your opponent's side of the field. Your opponent loses 500 Life Points during each of their Standby Phases. When this card is removed from the field, you lose Life Points equal to the combined damage inflicted to the opponent by this effect x 2. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Picture looks like an exploding Red-Eyes. I'm working on a Dragon Set too. I'm up to 13 cards at the moment. As for this card, looks reasonably balanced. Picture, I think I've seen it once before. OCG looks good to me. 9.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exyst Posted July 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Thanks Goldshine. it means alot. If you need any help with them, ask me. Feel free to use this card as well in your set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Thanks. Ill give credit too. As for my set, feel free to use some if you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exyst Posted July 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Sweet =D Any more rates? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Good card. 9/10I would reword it to this though (not sure if it's perfect though). "To activate this card, select one face-up Dragon-Type monster on the field. This card is placed face-up on your opponent's side of the field. While this card remains face-up on the field, your opponent loses 500 Life Points during each of their Standby Phase. When this card is removed from the field, you take double the total damage your opponent took by this card's effect." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exyst Posted July 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Hmm...Ill place both on, Vote on which is right Ill add poll Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 ok no problem, just trying to help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exyst Posted July 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Poll added. Also updated it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 ooops take out the inverted comma on "remain's"I just fixed it on my comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thunderfang12 Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exyst Posted July 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 more than a one-word review would be nice. But hell, at least they are nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Nice card, Cyber. ;) The image is great. Your OCG is spot on, too. And the card is pretty well balanced. Keep up the hard work. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Blud Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Not bad. Your better than me! lol 8.25/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exyst Posted July 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 thanks guys, you bring a tear to my eye...... EDIT: 3 stars, W00T! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Please take out the lettering from the pic...its not good.Fix it/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exyst Posted July 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 =o Ok, i suppose,... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 I don't think you or alim had correct grammar, you both made typical mistakes such as one instead of 1, and had some unnecessay bits and some miswordings. Here's what I think the OCG should be: Select 1 face-up Dragon-Type monster on the field. When this card is activated, place it face-up on your opponent's side of the field. The controller of this card loses 500 Life Points during each of their Standby Phases. When this card is removed from the field, you lose Life Points equal to the combined damage inflicted to the controller by this effect x 2. The "your opponent" art makes it sound like it's your opponent's opponent, meaning you. Because they have the card, so how about you make it "the controller". I think it's UP'd, 'cuz you'll always be taking more damage than your opponent, and why do you select a Dragon-Type monster? Maybe just make it so "This card can only be activated if there is a face-up Dragon-Type monster on the field." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 good points ^ agreedI wasnt thinking that deep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exyst Posted July 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 >.< Doom Wraith,This card is meant to be treated as the opponent owns this card when flipped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 I know. Never said it wasn't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSBB Fan Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 But. nontheless, it is still a very good card. I'd say it's balanced. GOOD JOD!7.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exyst Posted July 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 oh, ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Take out x2, good pic and effect. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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