capi Posted July 21, 2008 Report Share Posted July 21, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted July 21, 2008 Report Share Posted July 21, 2008 Underpowered. Bad Pic. Discarding three cards from your hand would be enough. Not bad for a new member, just keep trying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 21, 2008 Report Share Posted July 21, 2008 Overused pic & spelling errors. You'll get it though. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted July 21, 2008 Report Share Posted July 21, 2008 Not a bad card, but I see a number of things that need some work: 1) It should be a Winged Beast, not a Beast.2) Your OCG is WAY off. It could go like this: By discarding 3 cards from your hand, this card can attack your opponent directly. 3) The effect is too basic. You should go for a more elaborate effect; go for something new and fresh.4) The name really doesn't suit the image. What makes this monster so secret? Still, not a bad attempt. Just keep at it and you'll get better. :D I'm gonna give this a 6.9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted July 21, 2008 Report Share Posted July 21, 2008 wow saturnpaladin, you sure help out :)as always, a recommend atk 2600 and def 2100 that's betteradd more effects! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted July 21, 2008 Report Share Posted July 21, 2008 OCG has been taken care of, picture is alright, its underpowered. Make the effect discard 3 cards instead of 3 Spell cards. Youll get it. 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=aTaLiG= Posted July 21, 2008 Report Share Posted July 21, 2008 overused pic.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted July 21, 2008 Report Share Posted July 21, 2008 Overused pic is overused. ~ Atomix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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