Arctic_Circle34 Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 ARRRRGGGGHHH!!!! My Internet Disconnected! Now I gotta do this again! Here we go! Warpy. Put those two together. Now for the phoenix's Be nice and Judge them fairly...or I'll hunt you down...Nah, I'm just Kiddin' you're great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 Winged-Beast should have a hyphen in between, as well as Winged-Beast-Type. Graveyard and certain kinds of summons should be capitalized (Special Summon, Normal Summon, Set, etc., but when using only summon meaning all kinds of summons, summon is not capitalized. I know, confusing right? :P) ATK and DEF should always be capitalized. For the last card, "face-up" should be before "Defense Position" in the last sentence, not to mention that Defense should also be spelled out. Decent first cards. Keep going! 7.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
v8561v Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 Winged-Beast should have a hyphen in between' date=' as well as Winged-Beast-Type. Graveyard and certain kinds of summons should be capitalized (Special Summon, Normal Summon, Set, etc., but when using only summon meaning all kinds of summons, summon is not capitalized. I know, confusing right? :P) ATK and DEF should always be capitalized. For the last card, "face-up" should be before "Defense Position" in the last sentence, not to mention that Defense should also be spelled out. Decent first cards. Keep going! 7.5/10.[/quote'] Nuff said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arctic_Circle34 Posted July 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 Uh no they don't need a hyphen. Just check any winged beast monster in the game. There is no hyphen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 Nobody uses sacrifice any more. Use tribute.Good idea. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arctic_Circle34 Posted July 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 I'll work on that too. By the way check my Phoenix Dragon forum, the first cards I put up. a page maybe 2 behind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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