Deity Mitsu Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 This is the latest from yours truly. Trying to change the game somewhat, by allowing you to use your opponent's big beasties to your own advantage! Check it out! I need to know how to make it better, so comments are appreciated.(Love the name, pleeeeaaaase. It took me so long to find a good name...). PULL ZEE CURTAINS. This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Summoned, move 1 monster from your opponent's Graveyard to your Deck face-up, then shuffle your Deck. When the face-up monster is at the top of your Deck, you can pay Life Points equal to the Level of the monster x500 to Special Summon it to the field ignoring Summoning conditions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 pretty good, though capitalize "Summoned" and it might be better if it were worded "the deck is then shuffled." Other than that, 8.5/10. Good job, mate. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted July 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 Thanks dude. I don't think summoned needs to be capitalized when its just by itself, only when used with Normal or Special etc. But I'll check for sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 well Kale.. i say 9/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted July 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 :P Thank you MC. Competition of the friendliest? Haha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 check the wiki on Arma. Knight. Summoned is capitalized. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 yea.. Summoneds cap'd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted July 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 Alrighty cool. So, any suggestions on changing the effect? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 nah.. thats fine as it is ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted July 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 Alrighty. I've edited the OCG to your likings! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 I'm kinda satisfied...but the bg of the pic...its white...blank...plain.Satisfy me please/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 Situationally Underpowered. Say you select a Level 4 monster, it would take 2000 Life Points to summon, and thats even if it ever gets to the top of your Deck. I would rather use Monster Reborn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSBB Fan Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 Situationally Underpowered. Say you select a Level 4 monster' date=' it would take 2000 Life Points to summon, and thats even if it ever gets to the top of your Deck. I would rather use Monster Reborn.[/quote'] He makes a really good point. Lower the cost to 200 or 300......yeah 200 sounds good. Other than card is great. Btw don't change the pic, it looks AMAZING! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arctic_Circle34 Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 It's you, the Bird Hater, I can get my revenge......hahaha, Nah I'm just Kiddin' you're a prince. Anyways, it was "Winged Beast" no hyphen between. Alright, nice pic, good effect. Excellent card, very decent. I give it a 9/10. The only thing is that the cost for summoning the monster is too high, lower it and you got a work of art. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xDTAxCarnage Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 Finially I found a Genius on this Site. Great Card yo! 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N00B Hunter Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 Situationally Underpowered. Say you select a Level 4 monster' date=' it would take 2000 Life Points to summon, and thats even if it ever gets to the top of your Deck. I would rather use Monster Reborn.[/quote']wrong! wrong! Wrong! Wrong! WRONG!!!! NOT the right idea when looking at this! This is situationally overpowered, because it gives you free monsters. This adds Summoning capabilities to the game hardly before seen! (see "AAU") The key to this card is that you can Summon a monster regardless of summoning conditions. If your opponent has "DAD", and you got it to the Graveyard (unlikely, rofl) then "DAD" can come to your aid. If you want to stall for a while, this is a good way to get a second "Marshmallon", and you can even summon Fusion, Ritual, and Synchro Monsters!! Too easy it could be to flip the tables in the blink of an eye, and who cares about LP cost? LP matters at around 1000-800; never until. I would love to stock this in a Side Deck, for when I face an aggo opponent or something... say, could I work out a combo for the "Sacred Beast" monsters too? You want suggestions, then remove the part about Summoning regardless of conditions, and decrease the DEF by 100 for a (nearly) perfect card! (pic needs a little adjustment) :mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted July 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 Thanks guys. Kinda mixed up about how I'm supposed to edit the card now though :S :P. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 This card is Lightsworn death. Lightsworns mill so quickly players usually just let one or two JDs to the Graveyard so they can MReinc them; pick JD, and this card can give you the ultimate destructive force for... 5000 LP. Hm, it really is underpowered. Lower the cost to 300. Then you can get the ultimate destructive force for 3400 LP; you're still taking more damage, but next turn you'll stay alive. The card's brutal, but the cost must be exactly 300 to be balanced against Lightsworns. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 Pretty good card. Maybe change the first part of the name though. Braef sounds wierd. =S8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 Situationally Underpowered. Say you select a Level 4 monster' date=' it would take 2000 Life Points to summon, and thats even if it ever gets to the top of your Deck. I would rather use Monster Reborn.[/quote']wrong! wrong! Wrong! Wrong! WRONG!!!! NOT the right idea when looking at this! This is situationally overpowered, because it gives you free monsters. This adds Summoning capabilities to the game hardly before seen! (see "AAU") The key to this card is that you can Summon a monster regardless of summoning conditions. If your opponent has "DAD", and you got it to the Graveyard (unlikely, rofl) then "DAD" can come to your aid. If you want to stall for a while, this is a good way to get a second "Marshmallon", and you can even summon Fusion, Ritual, and Synchro Monsters!! Too easy it could be to flip the tables in the blink of an eye, and who cares about LP cost? LP matters at around 1000-800; never until. I would love to stock this in a Side Deck, for when I face an aggo opponent or something... say, could I work out a combo for the "Sacred Beast" monsters too? You want suggestions, then remove the part about Summoning regardless of conditions, and decrease the DEF by 100 for a (nearly) perfect card! (pic needs a little adjustment) :mrgreen: At the cost of 3500 Life Points, a wasteful monster summon, a wasteful Release, and if it ever got to the top of your Deck, overpowered indeed. And your wrong wrong wrong, the card is Situationally underpowered actually, i never said anything about it not been situationally overpowered, of which doesnt mean i didnt think of the idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted July 25, 2008 Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 DJ Won, again (lol) 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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