Parting Shot Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 [align=center]I've had this effect on paper for awhile, but couldn't find a good image until I was perusing wolfberserker's image thread today. I saw this and was happy I finally found a good one :P -||- -||- Comments and suggestions are welcome as always ^_^ Image Credit:Image by - wolfberserkerEdits by - Bloodrun[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Max Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Interesting effect Scott! So you get to move 1 Monster per turn. But what if you have no Free Spaces? You're screwed! I personally am a fan of Counters & Tokens as well. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Wolfberserker used that pic a couple days ago on a card.Your card is good too. ^_^9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Void Old Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Here's a minor wording fix. ^_^ When this card is activated, Special Summon 3 "Ninja Bot Tokens" to your side of the field in Defense Position. If a "Ninja Bot Token" is selected as an attack target, you can move it to an adjacent unoccupied Monster Card Zone to negate the attack. "Ninja Bot Tokens" cannot be Released, used as Fusion Material Monsters, or used as Synchro Material Monsters. I believe that should be right. The Ritual thing is already covered since they can't be Tributed. If you mention Synchro monsters you should use Master Rule OCG. It seems like a very pesky card, maybe even a little too pesky. The later Sets have 4 letters in the first parts of their Set IDs. World Championship video games used to use WC6 and below, but they started using WC07 and WC08 as proof of this transition. Some story with Duelist Packs. All in all, a nice innovative and annoying card. Nice job Darth! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted July 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Thanks everybody! I'm very glad you like it ^_^ @Void - Thanks, but your OCG fix is missing the stats of the Tokens, which is essential. Also, the "your side of the field" isn't necessary anymore if you look on recent cards. And, I think that how I worded the last sentence is probably fine, if slightly redundant :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 To me your effect seems little bland. But I can see that using this as a Quick-Play relatively short effects, like this, hold alot more immpact during the game oh, and i sent you your pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted July 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 To me your effect seems little bland. But I can see that using this as a Quick-Play relatively short effects' date=' like this, hold alot more immpact during the game oh, and i sent you your pic [/quote']Bland? Really? I thought it was quite interesting.... Well, thanks for your comments, and for the pic ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Millenium Mike Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Very neat and exceptionally creative effect. Good job!10/10!!! Magnificent! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 To me your effect seems little bland. But I can see that using this as a Quick-Play relatively short effects' date=' like this, hold alot more immpact during the game oh, and i sent you your pic [/quote']Bland? Really? I thought it was quite interesting.... Well, thanks for your comments, and for the pic ^_^ well by blandi meant smallit reminds me of scapegoat lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yogg-Saron Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Looks nice, could be abused.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted July 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Thanks Mike and Mike, lol. I'm glad you both like it ^_^ @Blood - Lol, is reminding you of Scapegoat a bad thing? Most Token creating cards look similar, cuz they all do virtually the same thing, just with different kinds of Tokens :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 I love dat pic!!!!! PS, I'm beating most mods on Posts xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted July 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 I love dat pic!!!!! PS' date=' I'm beating most mods on Posts xD[/quote']Lol, I'm glad you like it. Wolf made a great pic, and then Blood made it even better with the shadows he added to it. I'm really grateful to both of them ^_^ And, congrats ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 not your best Bro. :/ 12.75/13.69 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 no it isnt, good but not as well... 8.79/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Metal Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 Erm whats the point of the tokens? To just move around or are they just used to protect your Life Points? Dunno I wouldn't really use it but....It is a very nice card 9.45/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 Nice card. Underpowered. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted July 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 Lol, thanks everybody! And, yeah, it was mostly just a quickie, so it didn't have as much thought as I probably could have squeezed in it :P Thanks for the comments ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 It looks like it was rushed... 8/10 :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 Not bad. I would probably say theyre underpowered but not really because you are still allowed a Summon on the turn you activate this card unlike Scapegoat, Stray Lambs, Fires of Doomsday, and cards like that. I like the picture. It actually suits the effect of the card. Overall, I would say it is worth a 9.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Master Ygo Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 Cool card, a bit underpowered but Great 9/10 Nice Pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Father Wolf Posted July 29, 2008 Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 what is this editing my work! and making it better!tho has doneith a sin. tho can not improveith perfection!.....ith. just kidding nice card, cool effect. 8.5/10im happy my art made a card dream come true. it makes the whole thing worth it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted July 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2008 It looks like it was rushed... 8/10 :?Well' date=' actually it wasn't. I had the effect on paper for at least a week before making the card, and then I found the pic and just had to use it :P. Thanks for the rate ^_^ Not bad. I would probably say theyre underpowered but not really because you are still allowed a Summon on the turn you activate this card unlike Scapegoat, Stray Lambs, Fires of Doomsday, and cards like that. I like the picture. It actually suits the effect of the card. Overall, I would say it is worth a 9.5/10.Yeah, I also think it might be slightly underpowered as well. Thanks for the comments ^_^ what is this editing my work! and making it better!tho has doneith a sin. tho can not improveith perfection!.....ith. just kidding nice card' date=' cool effect. 8.5/10im happy my art made a card dream come true. it makes the whole thing worth it.[/quote']I'z sorry! Lol :P Actually, it was Bloodrun who thought the original pic was a little too light, so he just added some shadow to it so it better fit the name and effect :P. No disrespect was intended. Yeah, your images are great! If so many people didn't use them, I'd use them more often ;). Thanks for the comments, rate, and pic ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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