01alim Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 Anyways, I stumbled upon yet another picture which reminded me of 2 cards in particular.... So I made thisIf you control this card in face-up Attack Position, you lose 400 Life Points during each of your End Phase. If this card attacks, it is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Battle Phase. This card's battle position cannot be changed until the end of your next turn. When this face-up Defence Position card is attacked, you can discard 1 card from your hand to change this card to Attack Position before damage calculation. Hope you rate it well!I DO NOT OWN THE ART (I ONLY HOLO-ED IT) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 A little high powered for Level 6. I think you should read through your text again and see if you can see an obvious error in the last sentence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobbyman46 Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 I like the picture it's a big scary orc/goblin thing. It's got a big error in the last sentence. And it's a little over powered for 1 tribute. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted August 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 LOL Fixed it!Well, I tried to keep to the theme of Goblin Attack Force and the Elite one too, which both were strong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 An improved Goblin attack force. Not bad.8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Not really overpowered. It still has a few minor drawbacks such as a -1 Hand advantage to save it from getting killed while in Defense Position. I like the idea. 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted August 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Thanks guys!Goldshine, at least you see where the balance lies...^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rikana Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 You could make it a bit more balanced by saying it could only be Special Summoned with "Goblin Attack Force" or "Elite Goblin Attack Force" as a tribute but even though I like the idea of a strong Goblin :P 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spiff! Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 amazing!10/10!you,sir,are a genius.+1 rep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted August 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Thank you Rikana for the idea, and thanks alot The Almighty Animator for the rep, appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 4, 2008 Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 I like the idea, 8.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted August 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 Yahoo! A chance to B-U-M-P this baby back up!Oh thanks Emperor! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Master Ygo Posted August 4, 2008 Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 maybe you should say "you can discard 1 card from your hand to....." instead of "by" because it's outdatedPic is awesomeOCG is Solidunique effect and balancedOverall 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shonenhikada Posted August 4, 2008 Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 world of warcraft pic lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted August 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 Hey yo thanks CMY!Glad you liked it, and also changed what you suggested. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted August 4, 2008 Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 Meh, not that great, basically, all you did was that you added the LP cost and protection. Unoriginal. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destruction10 Posted August 4, 2008 Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 Awesome card but maybe the OCG should be like this:If you control this card in face-up Attack Position, you lose 400 Life Points during each of your End Phase. If this card attacks, it is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Battle Phase. This card's battle position cannot be changed until the end of your next turn. When this face-up Defence Position card is attacked, you can discard 1 card from your hand to change this card to Attack Position before damage calculation. maybe this will help you ^_^9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted August 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 Elsandero, that is kind of the whole point, but thanks anyway!If I wanted to, I could've created a whole new ORIGINAL card, but that wasn't what I intended... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted August 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 Awesome card but maybe the OCG should be like this:If you control this card in face-up Attack Position' date=' you lose 400 Life Points during each of your End Phase. If this card attacks, it is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Battle Phase. This card's battle position cannot be changed until the end of your next turn. When this face-up Defence Position card is attacked, you can discard 1 card from your hand to change this card to Attack Position before damage calculation. maybe this will help you ^_^9.2/10[/quote']Sorry but what's the difference?Maybe you were a bit late, lol.Thanks anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted August 4, 2008 Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 Elsandero' date=' that is kind of the whole point, but thanks anyway!If I wanted to, I could've created a whole new ORIGINAL card, but that wasn't what I intended...[/quote'] Ah, alright ^_^ But still, I don't see the reason why people on this site find this card so "amazing", I mean, come on, there's nothing amazing about it (no offense) I only saw 1 member (not including myself) in this thread who shared some constructive criticism, all the other members, bunch of followers, that's what they are -.-" (again, no offense, I'm just sharing my opinion here) EDIT: Don't double post 01alim, this is a warning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted August 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2008 Ooops sorry... Yeah no problem, I don't mind if you don't like this card as much as others do.To tell you the truth, I agree, this card isn't as 'amazing' as people put it IMO, but I appreciate what people think. But thanks for sharing your opinion, Elsandero. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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