The Ultimate World Of Card.Lock this 1 please.

[Jovi Siagian]

Umm.....The newest chapter, it's a little bit too short. And put the space between each line, instead of only some them.

[vamki]

I know.Im adding it.I dont know how to save a story.So just keep checkin out.It will grow almost like a tree.

[Omegamon-X]

For me i only give this a great story telling but there are some mistakes(his spelling)

[vamki]

Examples plz.

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

Format it like:

 

Vamki: "Blah blah"

 

He got up and searched through the room.

 

Brian: "Blah Blah..."

That's what you shouldn't do.

 

This is it.

 

*start example*

Bob walked into the forest. The forest was green. "The forest is green," Bob observed.

 

Suddenly, a figure jumped out of the forest. The figure was black. "Who are you?" demanded Bob.

 

"I am Joe," Joe introduced himself, "and I will eat your soul!"

 

"Bring it on!" Bob challenged, drawing his sword.

*end example*

 

Novel format. Lots of description, dialogue in quotes. Start a new paragraph every time there's a new speaker.

 

BTW, the story sucks. And by that I mean, there is no story.

[vamki]

OOOOHH My!!!!Do you mean that I nid to all over again?*Fainted*Please cant you guy just accept it.Bring me to bed,I nid to rest.

[vamki]

And you hurt my feeling.......

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

And you hurt my feeling.......

Too bad. I don't like bad FF writers. Script format is doomed to lead to a bad story.

[vamki]

Fine,Let delete this 1.

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Lock this up please

[RoxasBrianXXX]

Such a pity.30%people hate this!OMG