Phantasy Dreamz Posted October 11, 2008 Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 [align=center]im sure this pix has been seen before.. i still like it and want to use it for this card..so get over that...please rate/comment/suggestion http://galeon.hispavista.com/elcorazondelascartas/img/card_monster_Exodia_complete_001.jpg [spoiler=Effect] This card cannot be Normal Summon or Set. This card cannot be Special Summon except by sending at least 3 different "Forbidden One" monsters from your hand to the Graveyard. When this card is Summoned, you can send up to 2 different "Forbidden One" monsters from your Deck to the Graveyard. Each time a Spell Card activates, return 1 "Forbidden One" monster from your Graveyard to your hand, and negate the effect of that Spell Card. This card cannot be remove from the field while it's face-up. If a "Forbidden One" monster is sent to the Graveyard (except by this card's effect), destroy this card and remove it from play. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the bucket 90 Posted October 11, 2008 Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 Name: 10/10 Exodicus sounds cool :PPic: 10/10 coolEffect: 9/10OCG: 8/10 Special Summoned. You dont use Atleast when sending cards to the grave.TOTAL:37/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BulletMan Posted October 11, 2008 Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 kinda Oped. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted October 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 Name: 10/10 Exodicus sounds cool :PPic: 10/10 coolEffect: 9/10OCG: 8/10 Special Summoned. You dont use Atleast when sending cards to the grave.TOTAL:37/10 you are correct mateid changed itits now "up to" instead of "at Least"thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted October 11, 2008 Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 can be a bit overpowered,but it still works out well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted October 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 kinda Oped. 6/10 can be a bit overpowered' date='but it still works out well[/quote'] you think huh???well would you be kind to tell me which part made it ov'pw mates......thanks.. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted October 11, 2008 Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 kinda Oped. 6/10 can be a bit overpowered' date='but it still works out well[/quote'] you think huh???well would you be kind to tell me which part made it ov'pw mates......thanks.. ^^well I think that it should only cannot be destroyed in battle, if the thing was immortal, it will be too powerful.Since the first effect goes with a spell, you can take out a few parts in 1 turn. Also the effect of being removed from game when removed from the field sounds more balancing & include an effect that forbids you from adding cards from graveyard to hand except by this card's effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted October 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 kinda Oped. 6/10 can be a bit overpowered' date='but it still works out well[/quote'] you think huh???well would you be kind to tell me which part made it ov'pw mates......thanks.. ^^well I think that it should only cannot be destroyed in battle, if the thing was immortal, it will be too powerful.Since the first effect goes with a spell, you can take out a few parts in 1 turn. Also the effect of being removed from game when removed from the field sounds more balancing & include an effect that forbids you from adding cards from graveyard to hand except by this card's effect. sounds really niceill edit it a bit and ask for more opinions many thanks mate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted October 11, 2008 Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 OMFG! I KNOW THIS PIC! I HAD AN EXODIA WITH THAT PIC BEFORE IN REAL LIFE! lolzNo kidding 0.o Also, this card is way overpowered to me, sorry =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted October 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 okfew changeswhat do you think now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted October 11, 2008 Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 It's a lil better now, but still stronger.Also, by "Forbidden" monster, do you mean forbidden type,or, a card with forbidden in the name *ocg/grammar issue hint* ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted October 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 well...everyone must know that "Forbidden" is referred to the Exotia piecesjust as it was stated in the Ultimated Forbidden Lordokmaybe "Forbidden One"not "Forbidden" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted October 11, 2008 Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 Pic is a bit blurred, but good idea. ^_^8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted October 11, 2008 Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 Am I the only one that notices that this card will always die on the turn it's Summoned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted October 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 what?!!?"After the End Phase of the turn that this card was Summoned" does it really kill itselfO.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted October 11, 2008 Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 No. The "Forbidden One" cards are sent to the graveyard before the End Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted October 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 yeathanks demented^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 This card cannot be Normal Summon or Set. This card cannot be Special Summon except by sending at least 3 different "Forbidden One" monsters from your hand to the Graveyard. When this card is Summoned' date=' you can send up to 2 different "Forbidden One" monsters from your Deck to the Graveyard. Each time a Spell Card activates, return 1 "Forbidden One" monster from your Graveyard to your hand, and negate the effect of that Spell Card. This card cannot be remove from the field while it's face-up. [b']After the End Phase of the turn that this card was Summoned, if a "Forbidden One" monster is sent to the Graveyard, destroy this card and remove it from play.[/b] It has to be Summoned by sending "Forbidden One" Monsters to the Graveyard, which is exactly what destroys it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corinthian Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 Solid OCG, good pic, good effect. Overall, 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 I see that you improve the card based on my input & I say it's better now...7.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted October 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 This card cannot be Normal Summon or Set. This card cannot be Special Summon except by sending at least 3 different "Forbidden One" monsters from your hand to the Graveyard. When this card is Summoned' date=' you can send up to 2 different "Forbidden One" monsters from your Deck to the Graveyard. Each time a Spell Card activates, return 1 "Forbidden One" monster from your Graveyard to your hand, and negate the effect of that Spell Card. This card cannot be remove from the field while it's face-up. [b']After the End Phase of the turn that this card was Summoned, if a "Forbidden One" monster is sent to the Graveyard, destroy this card and remove it from play.[/b] It has to be Summoned by sending "Forbidden One" Monsters to the Graveyard, which is exactly what destroys it. one word made all the matterand its "After" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 This card cannot be Normal Summon or Set. This card cannot be Special Summon except by sending at least 3 different "Forbidden One" monsters from your hand to the Graveyard. When this card is Summoned' date=' you can send up to 2 different "Forbidden One" monsters from your Deck to the Graveyard. Each time a Spell Card activates, return 1 "Forbidden One" monster from your Graveyard to your hand, and negate the effect of that Spell Card. This card cannot be remove from the field while it's face-up. [b']After the End Phase of the turn that this card was Summoned, if a "Forbidden One" monster is sent to the Graveyard, destroy this card and remove it from play.[/b] It has to be Summoned by sending "Forbidden One" monsters to the Graveyard, which is exactly what destroys it. one word made all the matterand its "After" Yes, except since it's after the turn when a "Forbidden One" monster was sent to the Graveyard, this card is still destroyed. How about make it say "If a "Forbidden One" monster is sent to the Graveyard by any means outside of this card's effect, destroy this card and remove it from play."? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted October 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 okthanks for the help loveappriciate it^^ *hugs* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 It should be "Except by this card's effect". Otherwise, it's better now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted November 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 thanks again lovefixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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