Dark Posted October 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 Chapter 9 will be THE longest chapter so far, and for chapters to come. And the most exciting, interesting, suspensful chapter! ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted October 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 BUMP... need ideas. Should Miike see Giratina in the next chapter, try to capture it and fail, or not see Giratina at all? HELPZ. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ropp Posted October 28, 2008 Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 Not see. Should see selebi and he try to capture. Then Celebi knocks him out. Then he wakes up and i find him :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeno101200 Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 I thought only Vesiqueen learned attack order. Maybe he should be telapoted to a torn world by Celibi to see what happening to the worlds. I wrote this story in a notebook to show my friends and they all gave 10 out of 10 to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted October 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 OMFGIHAVEANIDEAANDIBETYOUWANNAKNOWWHATITIS [spoiler=Translation] OMG I HAVE AN IDEA AND I BET YOU WANNA KNOW WHAT IT IS I will make Mew appear and re-enact the story of the GiraSquad taking Giratina. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeno101200 Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 To that idea I have something to say also maybe the girasquad appears, attacks Miike and Mew and tries to save Mew but Miike makes Pikachu protect it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted October 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Smart!!! I will totally use that idea! ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeno101200 Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 I have made a pokemon fan-fic to. Is it okay if I can use Miike in it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted October 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Sure! I would love to be in your FF. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeno101200 Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Alright I just finished chapter 1 and the prolouge so Im still working on the beginning parts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted October 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Great, I am kinda drawing a blank. I don't want to do it today, as I need to eat as much candy and watch as many movies as possible. I'll do it tomorrow. Chapter 9, I mean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted November 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 BUMP, still no ideas. Putting off CHAPTER 9 for now... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asterr259 Posted November 1, 2008 Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 Nice story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daxinator Posted November 1, 2008 Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 so Miike has Draniti now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted November 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 Nice story Well thank you. To dim down the work' date=' Chapter 9 will be split into two parts. This way I don't have to make all of it today. so Miike has Draniti now? Yes, a Pikachu, Dratini and a Combusken. Something tells me he will not like Ground types. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted November 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 Chapter 9 Completed! Reveiw and find typo's, please. I iz happy! :D:D:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
«₣lџχ» Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 This sounds like a boring script for a spin-off pokemon game, Seriousl no normal text like "I walked to my room" battles are cheap and its boring. Explain, instead of "pikachu dodged bulbasaurs vine whip, pikachu used thunder" Make it interesting "Pikachu lept backward from the ground as bulbasaurs vine whip came crashing before him, before touching the ground piachu used all his last energy in a overpowering Thunder to knockout his foe" not my best but soemthing more interesting -_-" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeno101200 Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 Chapter 9 is very interesting at the looks chapter 10 will be very interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted November 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 This sounds like a boring script for a spin-off pokemon game' date=' Seriousl no normal text like "I walked to my room" battles are cheap and its boring. Explain, instead of "pikachu dodged bulbasaurs vine whip, pikachu used thunder" Make it interesting "Pikachu lept backward from the ground as bulbasaurs vine whip came crashing before him, before touching the ground piachu used all his last energy in a overpowering Thunder to knockout his foe" not my best but soemthing more interesting -_-"[/quote'] First, tell me the difference between script format and and book format. This is script format. I hate book format. So don't tell me these things without knowing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted November 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2008 Le BUMP... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted November 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2008 BUMP x2, working on Chapter 10 now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
«₣lџχ» Posted November 5, 2008 Report Share Posted November 5, 2008 ' pid='1307677' dateline='1225639625']This sounds like a boring script for a spin-off pokemon game' date=' Seriousl no normal text like "I walked to my room" battles are cheap and its boring. Explain, instead of "pikachu dodged bulbasaurs vine whip, pikachu used thunder" Make it interesting "Pikachu lept backward from the ground as bulbasaurs vine whip came crashing before him, before touching the ground piachu used all his last energy in a overpowering Thunder to knockout his foe" not my best but soemthing more interesting -_-"[/quote'] First, tell me the difference between script format and and book format. This is script format. I hate book format. So don't tell me these things without knowing. "Script Format" sux on a fanfic, this fic is just plain boring :x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted November 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2008 Who's FanFic is this? Yours? Nope, it is mine. Do not tell me how to run things. And, yes, I may have quit YCM. But this thread is the only one I wish to maintain. Chapter 10 coming soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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