「tea.leaf」 Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 [align=center]Such a fine night;I couldn't ask for more. Two drifting bodiesGracefully collide beneath the stars. Soft flames eruptThrough unguarded hearts. Two gazes meet;acceptance parallel and blended. On this fine nightI am whole yet again. Poetry never was my strong point...[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Metal Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 Two drifting bodies? Are they dead? I hope so =P Nice bit of poetry thought, I enjoyed it quite a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 You have unnessesery words thereBut a nice poem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:|Fallen|:. Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 You have unnessesery words thereBut a nice poem same as above Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGiver Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 i like the words =x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 [align=center]Two drifting bodiesGracefully collide beneath the stars.[/align] [align=center]From where did these bodies come from?Are they dead?So many questionsLeft unsaid.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 So, it's basically a killer enjoying another murder? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 [align=center]Two drifting bodiesGracefully collide beneath the stars.[/align] [align=center]From where did these bodies come from?Are they dead?So many questionsLeft unsaid.[/align] Poetry isn't here to answer questions, its here to help place answers to other questions, that the reader might have. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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