Professor Cobra Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OnSlaUghT Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 what happened with the image it's all stretched up! the card is okay, but i think i've seen this before. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted October 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 I tried to shrink it, but I couldn't. I may not be able to get on for a couple days after this visit, so I wanted to get it done today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 Not too bad, try to center the image more though. I like the effect, and it is fairly balanced. The OCG/grammar of course is good, but I think your can say "by battle" instead of "as a result of battle" 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I Hate Snatch Steal Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 Here are some suggestions for you: The pic is WAYYYY stretched!I'd recommend cropping it with an image editor if it isn't square instead of stretching it The effect could use some rewording, The first sentence is unnecessary. Your fairy wouldn't be destroyed by battle with the second sentence alone if you added the word "instead" at the end. The card seems kinda lackluster for a level 8 synchro, maybe make it a lower level, or power it up a bit? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted October 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 Well, it is destroyed, then the 500 ATK boost is mostly useless. This way, if it would get destroyed, it gets stronger and stays on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I Hate Snatch Steal Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 Well' date=' it is destroyed, then the 500 ATK boost is mostly useless. This way, if it would get destroyed, it gets stronger and stays on the field.[/quote'] Sorry for being unclear. The effect seems kinda contradictory: The first sentence seems to keep the second sentence from ever triggering, if it never gets destroyed by battle anyway then when would it raise it's ATK/DEF to save itself? You could delete the first sentence and change the second sentence to, "When this card would be destroyed by battle, it gains 500 ATK at the end of the damage step instead." Or change the first part of the second sentence from "When this card would be destroyed by battle" to "When this effect is applied" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted October 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 Okay, if it WOULD be destroyed in battle, it isn't. Then, it gains 500 ATK points. Got it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 Prof. You have been here alot longer then most other members, by now you should know the rules, this is the fourth time this week you've not followed the rules. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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