MarshyK-XS Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 Hi this is my first card in ages well feel free to coment and rate MK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 Nuce card. 1 erros his/hers not He/She's8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarshyK-XS Posted November 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 thanks for feed back (havent been on in a while.) mk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 i havent ben on in a while either. My ocg kinda gets a bit bad when i dont go on for whil.e i think it happpens to others as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 Some minor errors like he/she. But since you haven't made a card in such a long time, it's only to be expected. Pretty good card though, 8.3/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:|Fallen|:. Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 nice8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarshyK-XS Posted November 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2008 ' pid='1322721' dateline='1226004771']nice8.8/10 thanks its a kind of tribute to [atomix] glad u like it tmk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hioco Posted November 7, 2008 Report Share Posted November 7, 2008 You have 24 hours to get permission for the pic or link back to another site from where you have got it from.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yu-Gi-OhMasters123 Posted November 7, 2008 Report Share Posted November 7, 2008 Its a cool card 8/10. Nice effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mikemaz Posted November 7, 2008 Report Share Posted November 7, 2008 If your opponent controls one face up monster during the turn this card is summoned you can discard one card to allow this card to attack twice this turn. try that. the effect reads a bit clearer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Future L Posted November 7, 2008 Report Share Posted November 7, 2008 And your opponent controls a monster. Good pic and effect. 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 Good pic. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarshyK-XS Posted November 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 my link sorry about that http://maxarkes.deviantart.com/art/Thunder-Spear-43036752 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 Only 2 errors: Monster = monster (1st one, not 2nd) his/her_________________________ I like it.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarshyK-XS Posted November 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2008 cheers you've come on a bit since I last saw u Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted November 11, 2008 Report Share Posted November 11, 2008 Good card, I like the picture, the OCG/grammar is decent and the effect is good. Not bad for your first card in 4 months ;) 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted November 11, 2008 Report Share Posted November 11, 2008 I'm afraid I don't see an artist credit in your post. Please add this information, otherwise your thread will have to be locked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Max Posted November 11, 2008 Report Share Posted November 11, 2008 Needs proof of permission. I'm locking this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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