Knight''s Title Book 1~ Secret of the Hyuuga: Finished. Now Discusing FanFic

[ragnarok1945]

same here, but I always wanted to know how she'd earn forgiveness. That's why I check ygo fanfics all the time for that

[Max.]

This Fan-Fic is incredible!

[Fen.]

Thanks a bunch Max, that means a lot coming from you.

[ragnarok1945]

the next chapter coming any time soon?

[Fen.]

I can post it now if u want.......

[ragnarok1945]

that'd be great, so I can comment

[Fen.]

Ok, New chapter is up. ^_^

[ragnarok1945]

Kellach is falling down a bottomless pit. I'm sure he'll be just fine.

 

As for Jake not being able to go one day without TV or food, that's nothing new. Probably has such a fast metabolism that he'll die unless he eats an elephant per day or something

[Fen.]

Yeah, Kellach's gonna be just fine..........

 

I see that Jake isn't gonna last very long......he's gonna be ripe for the picking.

In the next chapter, we get to see Dartz's Orichalcos lizard soldiers back in action!

[ragnarok1945]

either that or he's going to resort to cannibalism to stave off hunger

[Fen.]

That would be fun to watch....

 

Shadow gasped as he felt a tug on his leg. He theen felt a sharp pain shoot through him as something bit his leg. He turned to see what it was.

"Just fow a few minuthes?" Said Jake with Shadow's foot in his mouth.

[ragnarok1945]

is that a preview for the next chapter?

[Fen.]

No...I was bored...he doesn't resort to canabolism., I have this entire Fanfic written already anyways........

[ragnarok1945]

ok then. I can't wait to see how the next one will turn out

[.:Abarai Renji:.]

the fanfic is great so far. But' date=' as a true Shadow fan, i just have to ask: Will he, or will he not, have to turn into Super Shadow in any of the future chapters??? I just wanna know :)

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Shadow fan huh? Oh you are going to just LOVE chapter 14 then.

(Shadow fights in that chapter)

 

Oooohh, (shivers in exitement) I can´t wait! I can already imagine myself Shadow going berserk and Chaos Blasting away the entire castle! Wohoo! Shadow FTW XD

[Fen.]

Just you wait Final Flash, in 2 more chapters you get your wish!

 

New Chapter is Up! Kellach is falling fast, Hermione better do something!

[ragnarok1945]

how would be actually a USEFUL time for Jake to sneeze and roast the lizards.

[Fen.]

He has to be pretty lucky for that to happen.....

[ragnarok1945]

this is why he needs to bring his emergency pepper

[Fen.]

Bring on the pepper!

[ragnarok1945]

you know I wouldn't be surprised if he really did have it with him

[Fen.]

It would be good for him to make his weaknesses good for him.

[ragnarok1945]

unless of course he tries to hold it in, in which case his head would explode from the built up in trying not to sneeze

[Fen.]

That would be like something out of Robot Chicken......Heh

[ragnarok1945]

yeah, and also fun to see to add more comic relief for the fic