my fourth set Icy Monster Set please rate

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This is my fourth set

Icy Monster Set

Please Rate and Comments

 

[spoiler=Lore]All of the Icy Monsters can hold opponent's attack in one turn if Normal Summoned. This card can choose one monster that is existing in your field and ever made an ATK in this round and turn it into defense mode. This effect can only be used once in one round. when this card is destroyed in the monster card zone, it may not be snet to the Graveyard and used as a continuous Spell Card, it can be placed in the Spell and Trap Card Zone of your own

 

 

[spoiler=Lore]All of the Icy Monsters can hold opponent's attack in one turn if Normal Summoned.When this card successfully Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned or Special Summoned, you can select 1 Water Attribute Monster from own deck and send it to the Graveyard

 

 

[spoiler=Lore]All of the Icy Monsters can hold opponent's attack in one turn if Normal Summoned.When this card on the ground is sent into the Graveyard because of its destruction by the battle, both sides will lose 1000 lifepoints. When this card on the ground is sent into the Graveyard because of its destruction other than by the battle, the opponent will lose 2000 lifepoints

 

 

[spoiler=Lore]All of the Icy Monsters can hold opponent's attack in one turn if Normal Summoned. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand in Special Summon as many Level 4 or lower Beast-Type monster from your Deck

 

 

[spoiler=Lore]All of the Icy Monsters can hold opponent's attack in one turn if Normal Summoned. When this card Normal Summoned or Special Summoned successfully, you can add 1 Spell Card from your Graveyard to your hand. A monster that is destroyed by this monster as a result of battle is removed from play instead of going to the Graveyard. When this card is destroyed or removed from the field, it is removed from play

 

 

I got all of these pic search in the google

Thanks!

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they are how you say COOL lmao.

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Ummmm....

What do you mean?

[Chinotornes]

Some of the pics could use improvement, don't like the icy monster part of the name, lots of ocg errors.

 

6.7/10

[Bengal]

Not bad, the pictures started off pretty good, but they could be better for the last two cards. The OCG/grammar is O.K. but could use some work. For example: Water Attribute = WATER

 

The effects seem creative though, I like the effort put forth there.

 

7.5/10

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

First couple of pics are overused. The last couple are blurred and/or need cropping.

 

Some of the wording can be better.

 

7.5/10

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Thanks for the tips and comments!

I hope it can help me repair these cards

[narutoloverjoey]

dude, serious OCG

 

pics are okay, i agree though last two weren't good, meh 5/10.

 

needs work ^^

[Tefached]

the pictures suck....

[koorb]

what does "all of the icy monsters can hold opponents attack" mean?

[narutoloverjoey]

i no, i think it means either:

 

1. your opponent can not attack you if summoned??

2. they cant attack icy monsters

3. attack negated for 1 turn?¿

[●The True Riku●]

Ok the ocg is a disgrace to ice monsters!! *i wish one day that ice will be a real type for yugioh*

[Sleepy]

(I only can guess because something tells me I didn't quite understood the efects)

 

 

ok for the first one I would write it like this :

When this card is Normal Summoned, your oponent cannot select it as an attack target during their next turn. Once per turn, you can change 1 monster you control to Defense Position if it declared an attack this turn. If this card is destroyed while in the Monster Card Zone, you can place it face-up in your Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Continuous Spell Card, Instead of sending it to the Graveyard.

 

Second card:

When this card is Normal Summoned, your oponent cannot select it as an attack target during their next turn. When this card is Summoned successfully, you can send 1 WATER monster from your Deck to the Graveyard.

 

Third card:

When this card is Normal Summoned, your oponent cannot select it as an attack target during their next turn. If this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, both players take 1000 damage to their Life Points. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard (except as a result of battle), your oponent takes 2000 Life Points damage.

 

Fourth card:

When this card is Normal Summoned, your oponent cannot select it as an attack target during their next turn.Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to Special Summon as many Level 4 or lower Beast-Type monsters from your Deck.

 

NOTE: this fourth card is just too OVERPOWERED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Fifth card:

When this card is Normal Summoned, your oponent cannot select it as an attack target during their next turn. When this card is Summoned Successfully (excluding Flip Summon) you can add 1 Spell Card from your Graveyard to your hand. If this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, remove it from play instead of sending it to the Graveyard. When this card is removed from the Field, remove it from play.

 

NOTE: what can I say about this last one I wrote? OVERPOWERED..or I would say... DARK MAGICIAN OF CHAOS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! one of my favorite cards... but it was banned because of it's efect, not because of it's ATK. and you just did an exact replica of the efect + the efect that all your Icy monsters have (even If I misunderstood it it is an extra efect that makes it more powerful)

 

hmmmm.... about the evaluation....... mmmmmmm.......... 5/10 horrible OCG (I won't complain about the pics because I really don't have experiense in that)

[†Gravity Binder†]

Not that good i suppose.... >.> 7.8/10 Needs improvement....

[Shocked]

(I only can guess because something tells me I didn't quite understood the efects)

 

 

ok for the first one I would write it like this :

When this card is Normal Summoned' date=' your oponent cannot select it as an attack target during their next turn. Once per turn, you can change 1 monster you control to Defense Position if it declared an attack this turn. If this card is destroyed while in the Monster Card Zone, you can place it face-up in your Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Continuous Spell Card, Instead of sending it to the Graveyard.

 

Second card:

When this card is Normal Summoned, your oponent cannot select it as an attack target during their next turn. When this card is Summoned successfully, you can send 1 WATER monster from your Deck to the Graveyard.

 

Third card:

When this card is Normal Summoned, your oponent cannot select it as an attack target during their next turn. If this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, both players take 1000 damage to their Life Points. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard (except as a result of battle), your oponent takes 2000 Life Points damage.

 

Fourth card:

When this card is Normal Summoned, your oponent cannot select it as an attack target during their next turn.Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to Special Summon as many Level 4 or lower Beast-Type monsters from your Deck.

 

NOTE: this fourth card is just too OVERPOWERED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Fifth card:

When this card is Normal Summoned, your oponent cannot select it as an attack target during their next turn. When this card is Summoned Successfully (excluding Flip Summon) you can add 1 Spell Card from your Graveyard to your hand. If this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, remove it from play instead of sending it to the Graveyard. When this card is removed from the Field, remove it from play.

 

NOTE: what can I say about this last one I wrote? OVERPOWERED..or I would say... DARK MAGICIAN OF CHAOS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! one of my favorite cards... but it was banned because of it's efect, not because of it's ATK. and you just did an exact replica of the efect + the efect that all your Icy monsters have (even If I misunderstood it it is an extra efect that makes it more powerful)

 

hmmmm.... about the evaluation....... mmmmmmm.......... 5/10 horrible OCG (I won't complain about the pics because I really don't have experiense in that)

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Okay thanks for the tips.

[Spire]

Your OCG is good, though I do think the pics could be better and some are overused, 7.4/10.

[Revan]

meh. 7.3/10

[-DJ-]

Some of the pics could use improvement' date=' don't like the icy monster part of the name, lots of ocg errors.

 

6.7/10

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I agree with everything you say you have a good eye

[Sammidysam]

I say this to everybody. If this set is finished, please put it in Finished Cards/Sets. Thanks.

[narutoloverjoey]

dont really like this set . . . . 5/10

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Thanks for the comment's, rate, and the tips