silent savior/ Triky Crab cards/ all purpose cards for other decks (use your imagination for combinations)

[Sleepy]

I drew these and took the photos with my cell phone xD show me What's wrong or right with them. I'll be thankfull if you correct my OCG but even more if you tell me how to balance efects (except for "Exiled from the Triky Crabs". That one is broken for sertain duels on purpose

^-^" )

this crab monter doen't negate any atack, it can't negate direct atacks =)

[.Requiem]

NO ATTACHMENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Sleepy]

sorry ^^" I am trying to post one of my cards since 10:00 am and here is already 8:44 pm... guess I'll continue trying U_U

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oh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I finally got it ... thanks for whatever you helped me with ^-^

[Knightmare™]

Don't Capitalize the titles totally or types. OCG errors are there. Pics are good for being drawn.

7/10.

Prince of Chaos

[†Gravity Binder†]

Kinda Surprising actually..... 6.9/10 ^_^

[Chinotornes]

1st card:

life points =Life Points

opponent(s)= opponent's

graveyard= Graveyard

special summon=Special Summon

ATK position=Attack Position

remove from play the selected monster= remove the selected monster from play

tributed=Tributed (in new ocg Released)

tribute summon=Tribute Summon (new ocg Advance Summoned)

2nd card:

You can pay 1000 Life Points to negate 1 opponent's attack

3rd card:

/if this= If this

graveyard=Graveyard

card efect=Card Effect

put it in the bottom of your deck=place it on the bottom of your Deck

one=1

level 5 or higher level monster= level 5 or higher "LV" monster

/show=Show

opponent(s)=opponent's

when you only have 1 level 5 or higher monster on it=????(makes no sense to me)

draw two cards= draw 2 cards

 

Pics are good for hand drawn just try to improve your ocg

6.3/10

[Shocked]

Need a lot of work on the OCG

Good effect

Your drawing skill is not bad

very nice

6.5/10

[TwistedFlameApe]

1st card:

life points =Life Points

opponent(s)= opponent's

graveyard= Graveyard

special summon=Special Summon

ATK position=Attack Position

remove from play the selected monster= remove the selected monster from play

tributed=Tributed (in new ocg Released)

tribute summon=Tribute Summon (new ocg Advance Summoned)

2nd card:

You can pay 1000 Life Points to negate 1 opponent's attack

3rd card:

/if this= If this

graveyard=Graveyard

card efect=Card Effect

put it in the bottom of your deck=place it on the bottom of your Deck

one=1

level 5 or higher level monster= level 5 or higher "LV" monster

/show=Show

opponent(s)=opponent's

when you only have 1 level 5 or higher monster on it=????(makes no sense to me)

draw two cards= draw 2 cards

 

Pics are good for hand drawn just try to improve your ocg

6.3/10

 

You've misinterprutted some of the things he's trying to say.

 

"level 5 or higher level monster= level 5 or higher "LV" monster" in this he was trying to say that they all have to be level 5 or higher. not specifically "Lv" monsters.

 

"opponent(s)=opponent's" in this you could be right but i was assuming the "(s)" was put there for multiple opponents.

[Sleepy]

1st card:

life points =Life Points

opponent(s)= opponent's

graveyard= Graveyard

special summon=Special Summon

ATK position=Attack Position

remove from play the selected monster= remove the selected monster from play

tributed=Tributed (in new ocg Released)

tribute summon=Tribute Summon (new ocg Advance Summoned)

2nd card:

You can pay 1000 Life Points to negate 1 opponent's attack

3rd card:

/if this= If this

graveyard=Graveyard

card efect=Card Effect

put it in the bottom of your deck=place it on the bottom of your Deck

one=1

level 5 or higher level monster= level 5 or higher "LV" monster

/show=Show

opponent(s)=opponent's

when you only have 1 level 5 or higher monster on it=????(makes no sense to me)

draw two cards= draw 2 cards

 

Pics are good for hand drawn just try to improve your ocg

6.3/10

 

on the third efect of the third card what I meant is that you have to only have monsters on your hand(no spells no traps) and every single monster has to be a high level monster for this efect to activate (it is activated from the deck) =D

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Pretty impressive for drawings. ^_^

 

OCG errors have been mentioned.

 

8/10

[Sleepy]

thanks ^-^ for the comments. I'll work on the writing,

now ... can someone tell me if there is something that can be improved about the card efects? what cards are too lame or too powerfull ?

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and also ... I have like 10 new cards posted since last comment.. plz look at them and give me opinions =D

[Sleepy]

NO ATTACHMENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

SORRYY!!!!!!!!!! I didn't know how to post. I am new here. like 2 days old. I have atachments now ... somehow I could figure out how to do it

-_-" ^-^"

[Lord Smeagle]

These aren't entirely terrible, but how exactly do you plan on tributing seven monsters when you can't control more than 5? And Seal of Orichalcos doesn't count.

[Sleepy]

These aren't entirely terrible' date=' but how exactly do you plan on tributing seven monsters when you can't control more than 5? And Seal of Orichalcos doesn't count.

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there are monsters that count as two tributes each ^-^ you would need 3 of them + 1 more monster. that's how

 

do you think is too hard to summon? what would I have to change?

[Brendano Harns]

I sense a crab theme amoungst your cards...and I like it! They are my favorite animal! (I have 3 Hermit Crabs)

 

The drawings are awesome, I hope you get a scanner sometime; your pics will look better then, because it will make the color better. Again, don't draw on notebook paper.

[Sleepy]

I sense a crab theme amoungst your cards...and I like it! They are my favorite animal! (I have 3 Hermit Crabs)

 

The drawings are awesome' date=' I hope you get a scanner sometime; your pics will look better then, because it will make the color better. Again, don't draw on notebook paper.

[/quote']

 

thanks ^-^ I'm kind of surprised that this threat got any more comments. =D yes I'll try to borrow some friend's scanner for my next cards.... I actually have a 42 card deck of crabs like these, but since the deck itself is pretty much overpowered I decided just to make these... I'm working on a new deck.. I actually have 9 I use...made of paper ^-^" triky crabs is the 6th one. but these are old decks.. as well as old drawings... I'm trying to replicate all of them in a YCM version but I have to lower all efects and improve the drawings first.. (these drawings are 5cm by 5cm) I'll be posting all crabs in other threat later,... I just haven't been able to do it because I'm waiting for vacations.........

 

and now..... is there any suggestions to make my cards better and more balanced? if you look closely, those crabs pretty much summon themselves (all 4) when you summon one.... I have to lower that ( I think) :D

 

and as I write this commment................Bump ^-^"