My 100th Post Celebration

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At last, I reach 100th post

This is my Latest card

Dervio The Sea King

 

[spoiler=Card Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned when are only 3 Water Monster on your Graveyard. You can remove 1 Water Monster into you Graveyard from play to destroy 1 card on the field

 

 

Please Rate and comments

I got this pic on the google

Thanks!

[Catman25]

I'm not sure, but I think the second sentence should be worded: "Remove from play 1 WATER monster in your Graveyard to destroy 1 card on the field." Seems a little overpowered, but that's my opiniion. 7.8/10 Congrats on 100 Posts :P

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Water = WATER

 

Pic has be used a few times.

 

8/10

[Snitch]

OCG Errors

 

set = Set

Water = WATER

remove 1 Water Monster into you Graveyard = remove from play 1 WATER Monster in your Graveyard

to destroy 1 card on the field = to destroy 1 card on the field.

 

Change stars to 8, and change summoning conditions as they are OP.

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Thanks ^_^

[Professor Cobra]

Lower level to 8, good pic, WATER in your Graveyard, WATER, same for all attributes. 7/10

[narutoloverjoey]

OCG Errors

 

set = Set

Water = WATER

remove 1 Water Monster into you Graveyard = remove from play 1 WATER Monster in your Graveyard

to destroy 1 card on the field = to destroy 1 card on the field.

 

Change stars to 8' date=' and change summoning conditions as they are OP.

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to destroy 1 card on the field = to destroy 1 card on the field

 

you didnt change anything. . . .

[●The True Riku●]

Hmm..........it could be overpowered if you use it the right way.

[tommers2008]

others have already mentioned most ocg mistakes...

 

when are only 3 Water monsters on your Graveyard = wrong

 

when there are only 3 WATER monsters in your Graveyard = right

 

cant see anything else apart from what others have already mentioned...!!!

 

p.s: congrats on getting to 100 posts...

[Sleepy]

That's exactly one "Dark Armed Dragon" -_-" can't anyone else see that? sorry but I wouldn't call it original... and yes. Dark Armed Dragon is overpowered but is legal in tournaments because it's so hard to find and so expensive! if they reduce its price to less than 100 dollars they are going to have it banned. and this card is exactly the same.

 

ok. putting that aside. congratulations on your 100th post.

[†Gravity Binder†]

congratz on ur 100 post..... 7.9/10 4 the card >.>

[N00B Hunter]

This card would make small children cry... you should know, as a 2-star member AT LEAST the fact that it's "WATER", not "Water" or "water"... all caps, nothing else. That alone shows how little work was really put into this card.

 

So it's a Level 9 with 2800 ATK and 1900 DEF. Therefore it's not a stat monster -- so it's effect should be pretty good, right? No. It's almost impossible to summon (just 3 WATER Monsters in the Graveyard? Have fun trying to pull that off...), and then when it gets on the field, it has no preservation ability (like slight immunities to S & T, re-summoning, negation, etc..), which means it'll die fast, most likely. Sure, it's effect is all well and good as an offensive effect, but if your opponent activates "Hammer Shot", "Lightning Vortex", or "Mirror Force", then this card is done for.

 

There's not much promise from a card that is too hard to summon and gives too little benefit. I know you like making powerful cards, and a 100th post should warrant some great power card, but at least make it balanced and useful. I like the visuals (get rid of the 1ST EDITION, unless you're going to Photoshop a gold sticker onto the card), and the wording (OCG) burns me...

 

The picture is the best part of the card, easily! Keep up the work in that respect, and you'll be a regular prodigy in the ways of visuals :mrgreen:

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