Sleepy Posted December 1, 2008 Report Share Posted December 1, 2008 please comment on these cards and tell me what you think. accept good and bad comments =D I just want to improve. and before someone tells me about pic credit, let me tell everyone that I drew them by hand. Triky Surprise Frog: At any time, you can discard this card to return all monsters you control to the respective owner's hand(s). Then, Special Summon Level 4 or lower monsters from your Deck in Defense Position, equal to the number of monsters returned to your hand by this card's effect. (the Level of all card(s) Special Summoned by this card's effect must be equal). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lurker77 Posted December 1, 2008 Report Share Posted December 1, 2008 Did you draw the pictures yourself O_O There are OCG errors: Defense PositionSpecial SummonLevel 4 Suprise Frog seems overpowered letting you chose any monsters, plus you keeping the original monsters. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2008 Did you draw the pictures yourself O_O There are OCG errors: Defense PositionSpecial SummonLevel 4 Suprise Frog seems overpowered letting you chose any monsters' date=' plus you keeping the original monsters. 6/10[/quote'] thanks I'll correct those things ^-^ yes when I made it I also thought it was overpowered, then I added that the mpnsters had to be in Defense Position and had to share the same level. I wasn't sure if it was enough. can you tell me how can I make the card efect better? =D ok I already corrected the OCG in my Triky Surprise Frog is there something else? =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2008 added a new monster whose efect may seem plane and boring but I'm not sure how much is it going to work. I already posted it in another threat before but the cards were too many and too random so I guess that's why nobody gave any atention to them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 Great job! I really like them. More people need to start drawing their own pics. OCG like this WILL come and devour us in the middle of the night, though: This card can only be activated when you have 2 or less cards in your hand. Add the bttom 2 cards from your Deck to your hand. At any time, you can discard this card to return all monsters on you control to the respective owner's hand(s). Then, Special Summon Level 4 or lower monsters from you Deck in Defense Position, equal to the number of monsters returned to your hand by this card's effect (the Level of all card(s) Special Summoned by this card's effect must be equal). Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. If you Special Summon this card this way, it is returned to your hand during the End Phase. Once per turn during the Standby Phase,you and your opponent's Life Points are increased by 1000. There is you OCG for you, and I like the cards, I just would not draw them on notebook paper. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GenisSage91 Posted December 7, 2008 Report Share Posted December 7, 2008 Try drawing them on plain white paper. Other than that, 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2008 ok... thanks!!! for the new comments ^-^ I'll correct the OCG and re-do the drawings Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted December 9, 2008 Report Share Posted December 9, 2008 I am excited to see them! :D Again, great job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Man0waR Posted December 9, 2008 Report Share Posted December 9, 2008 I like the fact that as more cards are made, more pics become overused. So eventually well have 2 make our own pics ^_^!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted December 9, 2008 Report Share Posted December 9, 2008 its great isnt it?! lolas for the cards nice job the pics would be great if they were on plain paper and werent as fuzzy but no worries! everything else is pretty much said already about OCG and overpowering lol so nice! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted December 11, 2008 Report Share Posted December 11, 2008 its great isnt it?! lolas for the cards nice job the pics would be great if they were on plain paper and werent as fuzzy but no worries! everything else is pretty much said already about OCG and overpowering lol so nice! ^_^ Yes, I think multiple people have said that, so, don't worry, sleepy will change it. ;) BTW sleepy, he doesn't mean the good kind of "fuzzy" lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Man0waR Posted December 11, 2008 Report Share Posted December 11, 2008 HaHa! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted December 11, 2008 Report Share Posted December 11, 2008 Yeah, lol, but sleepy is a really good drawer, isn't he? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2008 updated efect of "Triky Surprise Frog" acording to Fuzzie's suggestions (thanks Fuzzie) :) but I added something else so it is less overpowered.... what do you all think? :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2008 Great job! I really like them. More people need to start drawing their own pics. OCG like this WILL come and devour us in the middle of the night' date=' though: This card can only be activated when you have 2 or less cards in your hand. Add the bttom 2 cards from your Deck to your hand. At any time, you can discard this card to return all monsters on you control to the respective owner's hand(s). Then, Special Summon Level 4 or lower monsters from you Deck in Defense Position, equal to the number of monsters returned to your hand by this card's effect (the Level of all card(s) Special Summoned by this card's effect must be equal). Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. If you Special Summon this card this way, it is returned to your hand during the End Phase. Once per turn during the Standby Phase,you and your opponent's Life Points are increased by 1000. There is you OCG for you, and I like the cards, I just would not draw them on notebook paper.[/quote'] thnx :) but.... there's 1 little thing ..... my Triky Crab Glutony's efect was suppose to declare the attack just by showing it from my hand to demonstrate that I have it.... its not suppose to actually touch the field...ever.... a little diferent than the spirit efects..... ...is that actually something acceptable for the game? I don't know how to explain it exactly in the text ^-^" next time I log in... I'll correct my spell cards :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted December 11, 2008 Report Share Posted December 11, 2008 Yeah, I don't think attacking from the hand works, unless it is a direct attack, which I could fix the OCG for, and it wouldn't neccarily "attack" from your hand, but it would be the same basic concept: Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, you can inflict damage to your opponent equal to this card's ATK. Tricky surprise frog: At any time, you can discard this card to return all monsters you control to the respective owner's hand(s). Then, Special Summon Level 4 or lower monsters from your Deck in Defense Position, equal to the number of monsters returned to your hand by this card's effect. (the Level of all card(s) Special Summoned by this card's effect must be equal). If the combined Level of all monsters in your Graveyard is less than the combined Level of all monsters discarded because of this card's effect, you can Special Summon all monsters discarded by this card's effect instead. This card can only be activated when you have 2 or less cards in your hand. Add the bottom 2 cards from your Deck to your hand. It is defense, not defence, and it is effect, not efect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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