lava_java16 Posted December 4, 2008 Report Share Posted December 4, 2008 I'm going to make magic and trap cards laterrate these so farnone of the pix are mineif anyone can find better pix, please tell me where i can find them or put them in a post please rate these!and i like good criticism, but harsh criticism is the only way you can become the bestso you can say whatever you want, just be serious Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
narutoloverjoey Posted December 4, 2008 Report Share Posted December 4, 2008 okay . . . 7/10 God of Seas, kind of overpowered for me. aw, its okay other than that, some bad pics (cupid) and some OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted December 4, 2008 Report Share Posted December 4, 2008 Check out the "OCG/Grammar Thread" for some help with your text. They need work, but have potential. Not sure they should all be Fairies. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
narutoloverjoey Posted December 4, 2008 Report Share Posted December 4, 2008 agreed, some should be "warrior" and maybe some winged beast . . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted December 4, 2008 Report Share Posted December 4, 2008 Meh cards are meh 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 4, 2008 Report Share Posted December 4, 2008 pretty good for a first post, really elaborated. there are some OCG errors and also. that's true, cupido's pic kind of sucks ^-^" give 1 more star to the Level of your god of the seas. about your field. I know you didn't mean it this way but it sounded to me like all battle damage involving fairies becomes 0. that means, neither you nor your oponent will take any battle damage from your monsters attacking (ever). sanctuary in the sky says battle damage reduced to 0 in a battle involving fairy type monsters but only to the controller of the fairy type monster. so that's a detail you may want to look :) reduce the ATK of hades to around 2600 it looks overpowered with 3500 + 100 for each monster in the graveyard of any player. I have had shadow ghoul surpass that starting with 1600 and only with the monsters in my graveyard. your monster will have around 6000 ATK almost always :( and its "special summoning itself" efect doesn't seem like much until you realise that in defense mode its actually destructible and will keep protecting you every turn. about the rest of the set :) and the set overall -------------7/10 almost forgot.... don't agree that you made 3 normal monsters....thats way too many.... and your first pic needs to be a lot bigger.....its not right... that downgrades your set sorry.....^^" 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted December 4, 2008 Report Share Posted December 4, 2008 I'm going to make magic and trap cards laterrate these so farnone of the pix are mineif anyone can find better pix' date=' please tell me where i can find them or put them in a post [spoiler=cards in here']please rate these!and i like good criticism, but harsh criticism is the only way you can become the bestso you can say whatever you want, just be seriousThere can only be one best. I believe that would be SaTuRnPaLaDiN or DeMeNTeD... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lava_java16 Posted December 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2008 its a figure of speech and i was actually thinking about changing the types too...the pix arent mine, so its kinda hard to find a good one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 4, 2008 Report Share Posted December 4, 2008 ATK, DEF, Normal Summoned or Set, Special Summoned, Graveyard, for every "God" or "Goddess" monster, capitalize deck, Tributing 1, cannot be selected, WATER, same for all attributes, Defense Position, raise Hades level to 9, some cards need their level or ATK raised, Cupid's pic needs color in the background, reduced to 0, involving this card, Fairy-Type monster, take out extra, face-up, you can, Spell and Trap cards, 1 Fairy-Type monster and 1 other monster, lower the Hydra's level to 9 (his pic also needs color in the background). 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted December 4, 2008 Report Share Posted December 4, 2008 Wording slightly off. Also, some pics could be better as some have no backgrounds and borders. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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