Twin Samurai Girl

[Nobita Nobi]

This is my newest card, please give comment,correction rate ETC, Support coming soon

 

[spoiler=card lore] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 LIGHT monster you control.If this card is Special Summoned succesfully inflict 800 damage to your Opponent Life Points. This card can attack Twice at the same Battle Phase. If you activate this effect, Damage calculation from the second attack is 0. If this card destroy a DARK monster by battle, Double the Battle Damage inflicted to your Opponent Life Points.If this card is destroyed by effect of Trap Cards controlled by your opponent, This card is removed from play. If this card is destroyed by Spell Cards controlled by your Opponent Return this card to your Deck, Afterward shuffle your Deck.

 

 

 

pic credit

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b278/Sandstar111/Anime%20Family/Animerocker10swordsmaster.jpg

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h121/SnakeEye_photo/The_Twin_Blades_by_crayishikara.jpg

http://www.testriffic.com/resultfiles/18789Last%20Samurai%20Background.JPG

[itzspooky]

looks cool.. But I dont get its effect? what is the point of having it attack twice if the second attack is 0? I mean at 1700 atk not too many monsters are gonna fear this one..

[Nobita Nobi]

oops, fixed ATK DEF and Effect

[Spire]

Just a few OCG errors:

 

Opponent = opponent

 

Afterward = then ...I think, if not it should be lower case.

[Future L]

Don't capitalize of, return, afterward, this, damage, twice or opponent, good pics, in the card name, add a space after periods, If you use this effect, during the same Battle Phase, a Spell Card, a Trap Card. 6.9/10

[LiAM]

your forgetting to pluralise your words.

 

you should read your cards and check for mistakes.

 

also you may need to revise some punctuation

[Professor Cobra]

Lower case the following:

return

afterward

opponent

damage

twice and

this

Good pics, don't capitalize of in the card name, add a space after each period,a Spell Card, same with Trap Card, during the same Battle Phase, If you use this effect,. 7/10

[brettore]

Omg your picture for your spellcard I was gonna use for my Seven Swordsman set but looks like you beat me to the punchXD

[Max.]

I agree with all of the above 7/10

 

~Max121

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Errors mentioned.

 

Maybe center the 1st pic a little more.

 

8/10

[Sleepy]

in this version... it looks like a fair efect to me :) you may be make battle damage of the 2nd attack 0 but you still get to destroy the monster. and it has a good pic too. to compensate that 0 damage efect, it has the extra damage if it destroys a Dark monster. but on the other side, your spell card looks kinda underpowered to me if it can only be equiped to that monster and only does increasings from 100 on 100, and only if it destroys a monster Light or Dark :(

9/10

[Nobita Nobi]

The Spell card effect is Increased its ATK and DEF by 100 Permanently each time you destroy a LIGHT or DARK monster, so i think its not underpowered

[Sleepy]

I know the ATK doesn't go down again, after all, that's what equips do. but I'm so used to spells like "United We Stand" (+800ATK for every face-up monster you control. "Mage Power" (+500 ATK for every spell and trap on your field) " axe of despair" (+1000 ATK and can go back to your Deck) and "Megamorph" (doubles ATK). and these cards can be equiped to any monster.

 

and to be honest the first thing I thought when I was reading was how could you use that let's see. against a water deck, a fire deck. or something like that. there would not be any single monster that could raise the ATK of yours when being destroyed. you would have to put some thought into it to play it and its for an increase from 100 to 100. and that with the fact that the card can only be equiped to your Twin Samurai Girl.

^-^"

 

there must be things you can do with it but I can't think of anything by the moment. I don't feel 100% alert from my senses today. may be because my time is 10:22 PM already and I should be asleep. ^-^"

[Nobita Nobi]

yes , i think i get it, fixed

[Sammidysam]

Just a few OCG errors:

 

Opponent = opponent

 

Afterward = then ...I think' date=' if not it should be lower case.

[/quote']What he said.

 

9/10

 

Nice card!

[Nobita Nobi]

thx. BUMP, and added 1 TRAP

[-DJ-]

looks cool.. But I dont get its effect? what is the point of having it attack twice if the second attack is 0? I mean at 1700 atk not too many monsters are gonna fear this one..

 

thats what I was gonna say