some cards plz rate..!!

[tommers2008]

i have decided to make a elemental heros set maybe 15to20 cards

 

here are some of my ideas...

 

please rate,review and comment..tell me where i can improve and that..

 

also should i continue making this set...??

[spoiler=platinum wingmans effect]"Elemental Hero Platinum Angel" + "Elemental Hero Avian"

This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. When this card is successfully Fusion Summoned apply 1 of the following effects.

- Discard your entire hand to the Graveyard, this card may attack your opponent directly.

- Discard the top 2 cards from your deck to the Graveyard, this card may attack all your opponents monsters this turn.

 

[Sleepy]

your platinium angel looks overpowered to me. I would compare it to raigeki or something like that.

I would suggest lowering that efect. I would do something like just selecting a type of card (spell, trap, monsters) and make your oponent show their hand and discard all cards of the type you choose. or something like that...

 

also ...upgrade platinium wingman to level 8.

 

for your last card you don't need to write "then the deck is shuffled". if you look carefully, no new cards include that in the efect because now is something you should do everytime you take something in or out of the deck.

 

8.7/10 :)

[tommers2008]

thank you for your comments sleepy... i have made a few changes to the cards..!!

 

do you tink i should make the full set..?? anybody else gonna rate or review them..??

[Sleepy]

they seem better now :) 9/10

about the fact that if someone else will rate them. I don't really know but I guess someone has to. personally almost no one rates mines when I have posted them and if they rate it's like the day after. it is really unpredictable. my personal opinion would be that I like the set and you should continue doing them. although I guess you will decide about that depending on the success of this. anyways, good luck ;)

[tommers2008]

i no what you mean..!!

 

thanks for the comments.. i actually think that i will continue making this set and post the full thing see how that does..!! but anyway thanks for your nice comments and for your help..!! +rep is on its way..!!

[Lazer Yoshi]

Some Grammar Errors, as you should use Commas ^_^

I like the Effects, and the Fusion Ideas... I like as well :D

Excellent Images, I bet they're from Magicdeckvortex.com, right? :P

Remember to cap. all of these in effects: "Any Summons, Monster, Spell, Trap, Ritual, Synchro, Fusion, Deck, Graveyard, and the names of cards :D"

Discard entire hand then draw 2 Cards = "Your opponent discards their hand and draws 2 cards."

9.2/10 :D

Keep it up ^_^

-Yoshi

[tommers2008]

Some Grammar Errors' date=' as you should use Commas ^_^

I like the Effects, and the Fusion Ideas... I like as well :D

Excellent Images, I bet they're from Magicdeckvortex.com, right? :P

Remember to cap. all of these in effects: "Any Summons, Monster, Spell, Trap, Ritual, Synchro, Fusion, Deck, Graveyard, and the names of cards :D"

Discard entire hand then draw 2 Cards = "Your opponent discards their hand and draws 2 cards."

9.2/10 :D

Keep it up ^_^

-Yoshi

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yep thats where their from great place to find images..!!

 

i never no the right place to put commas in..!!:(

 

i was never sure about deck so always left it uncapped now i no changes made..!! thanks a lot for your comments yoshi :) :)

[Sbaile]

I like them...ofcorse im not a fan of Elemntal Heros but its still a nice mini set.

These cards seam a little bit lose thoe...like they have potential but arn't gold yet.

The tape man is to costly and the discard your hand to attack directly on P.W. is just to good.

I would say that you should just stick with the second effect.

over all 8.5/10

[tommers2008]

thanks for your comment Sbaile..!!

 

i respect your opinion on both cards but i feel both effects are fine the way they are..

 

Yea i suppose 2600 direct attack is a good bit but you lose your entire hand and can only activate it once... and tape mans effect can be very helpful in some situations so it could be worth paying 500 life points...

 

anyone else have any tips for me or just a comment..??

[Yugiohrulez!]

I dont think tapeman wuz dat good, but the giant dudes pic pushed me to give u 10/10

[Spire]

For your last card, deck = Deck.

 

Pretty nice, cool pics and overall good OCG, 8.8/10.

[crolion]

This Elemental Cards are not bad, but honestly I don't like the pics..

 

So i'll give you 7/10

[tommers2008]

thank you all for your comments..!!

 

and Spire thanks for pointing out that.. im sure you meant the 2nd last card do platinum wingman.. i only saw it after you said it do so thanks..!!

 

keep the comments coming