3 New Cards - Rise of Dragons set

[Hero]

This my 2nd post ^^

 

 

 

[Hero]

Any suggestions for further improvement would be appreciated :)

[Flame Dragon]

Please don't double post

 

Divine Over Dragon - You don't need to say Effect, if its a flip effect it sould say FLIP:, change revive to Special Summon, change it to this card can not be destroyed, lower the states to 2700ATK 1700DEF. Also say This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can not be Special Summoned except by Tributing 3 monsters on your side of the field.

 

Overdrive sould say a card on your field not opponent's

 

I say 5/10

[God GAK]

Divine-Overdragon's effect should be like this:

This card can only be Tribute Summoned or Set by tributing 3 monsters on your side of the field. When this card is flipped face-up by paying 2000 Life Points you can Special Summon 1 Dragon monster from either player's Graveyard or from your hand. After using this effect this card is flipped face-down and Divine Over-Dragon and the Special Summoned monster cannot declare an attack. By offering a Dragon monster on your side of the field as a tribute a dragon monster on your side of the field cannot be destroyed by battle.

 

Pact with the Wyvern King should be like this:

 

As long as this card remains face-up on the field both players must pay 500 Life points each time a dragon monster is summoned or set. Increase the ATK and DEF of all dragon monsters on the field by 300 during each Battle Phase

 

Hope my advice was useful :D

[Hero]

thanks, ya i did need help making the effect shorter lol and i did kinda make Divine Over-Dragon a bit too strong, thanks for the advice :)