Nighthawk14 Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 SOME OF THESE CARDS ARE NAMED AFTER GEMS I LOOKED UP ONLINE.:lol::lol: THERE IS A LOT I KNOW I DONT THINK I DID TO WELLALL CREDIT GOES TO GOOGLE IMAGES Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Molten Meteor Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 Capitilization and OCG errors... Well done though. 6/10. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 I like them, great effort shown on this set. =P Remember LP= Life Points, some of the cards need Set IDs, and the Set IDs should have 4 character prefixes and EN followed by 3 numbers for the second part. Remove the circulations and put the img credit in your post instead to make the cards more realistic. A few other OCG errors you should look into on some of your cards: trap card = Trap Card spell card = Spell Card Make all the Synchros' Synchro Summon requirements "1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters" like you did on Black Coal Dragon. as a result of battle = by battle gains = gain (on Amethyst Dragon) "this card can attack again this turn until the end phase" = "this card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase." declares an attack = attacks Life points = Life Points Double = double And several more that you can look for in your other cards, use reference cards from the TCG and DJ's OCG guide to help you. =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Bishop Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 6.9/10 Good work! :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yu-gi-ohcardmaker Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 hi nighthawk14,i think you have improved on your card making (not that i could do any better) since you made your machine warriors of ATK and DEF i think you have spent you time on these cards and these cards are really good from yu-gi-ohcardmaker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 A bit overpowered, perhaps; Dragontron seems infinitely exploitable. However, the concept is very good. My only suggestion is drop the "Black" from "Black Coal" / "Black Onyx" It's redundant, since coal and onyx are always black. Other than that, it's good stuff. 9.2/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
●The True Riku● Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 Pretty good 6.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 Couple of the pics are overused. Couple effects could be longer. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragia Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 sweetness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 Amethyst is great! =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cerberus21 Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 These aren't bad, but you already posted some of your cards in your other thread. That's my only complaint tho, these are nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted January 31, 2009 Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 Not bad but a little tip with Synchros. Dont select Rare or Secret Rare when making them. It is very hard to see the card name, even for someone with perfect eye sight. Most of these pictures have been used more times than I care to count. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nighthawk14 Posted January 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2009 thanx for all the comments i made this awhile ago nice to know people still like these sorry about OCG It not the best , but not the worst i should probably get better i think its time though, but it has improved since then though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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