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[Earthbound411]

Hi this is my first card and I'm new to the forums. What do you all think? Give me as much feedback as possible.

 

the tag "GDE" stands for "Gods Demons and Exousia".

 

(Exousia means Authority or something lol)

 

Im planning on making a set and this is my first card.

 

EDITED VERSION:::

 

[Sleepy]

suggestions: take out the counter icon and turn it into a Normal Spell Card. counter is just for trap cards... but if you put any icon to this card it will be Overpowered.and make it so your turn ends after activation so your oponent will have an oportunity to react against this One Turn Kill Card

 

8/10 :)

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again.... I just now am reading what's over the card ^-^"

 

continue to post the rest of the deck on this threat...I'll see later..maybe the card will have a different rate once they are all together :D

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Graveyard

 

Deck

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Dark Hole + Heavy Storm + Card Destruction ≈ This card

[Kyrnen]

Not much OCG errors on the edited version. Only thing that is wrong is that graveyard is capitalized and so is deck. Other than that, It's pretty good. 9.5/10

[Shiranui]

I'm gonna go along with DeMeNTeD. This card is just too powerful for my tastes. But we're rating how good it is not on my tastes so...oh and Graveyard and Deck are supposedt to be capitalized i think.

8/10

[Earthbound411]

I'm gonna go along with DeMeNTeD. This card is just too powerful for my tastes. But we're rating how good it is not on my tastes so...oh and Graveyard and Deck are supposedt to be capitalized i think.

8/10

I edited the card so that it didnt have the counter effect anymore, and that when you activate it you cant attack. Isn't that balanced enough? :(

[Shiranui]

It's still unbalanced because it gives you massive field control. That's the only reason i PERSONALLY don't like it.

[Professor Cobra]

Change After that to Then, Deck, not respective Decks, capitalize graveyard. Good pic. 8/10