Please Lock

[Kyrnen]

Here is a card I think Jaden would have used if it existed.

Rate, Hate, Comment.

[Blitzkrieg98]

Hmm... A Fusion Monster for Jaden? To be unfortunately blunt, I don't really like what I see.

 

Rating:

 

Stats: 5.25/10 (Upsetting... This obviously spits in the face of modern-day Fusion Monsters. I'd suggest changing the ATK to 2600 and DEF to 1950, so it can at least hold its own against the opponent should the opponent try an attempt on its life.)

 

Effect: 7.50/10 (Hmm... While I respect the concept of "power up certain monster by insert amount here", the effect should be a little stronger in priority for a monster that could be a little hard to Summon. Perhaps this could help: "Once during either players' Battle Phase, you can discard 1 card to select 1 "Elemental Hero" monster you control. The selected "Elemental Hero" monster gains 500 ATK until the end of the Battle Phase. When this card is destroyed, add 2 "Elemental Hero" or "Evil Hero" monsters and 1 "Polymerization", "Miracle Fusion", or "Dark Fusion" from your Graveyard to your hand.")

 

Grammar: 7.75/10 (I can see you are used to an older style of the official card grammar. On that note, sure copyrighting Kazuki Takahashi for a manga he created and a card game it spawned is okay, but this is YOUR creation. You should get credit. The copyrighting will have no effect on your score since it is a probably personal choice and I have no control over that.)

 

Overall: 7.0 (This card does have potential, but I don't think Jaden would have used it in this state...)

[Sleepy]

do not have to ask more people to lock it -_- just needs some adjustments on the effects and stats of the card so it can be more useful... pic is blurry... I say all the above is kinda true but you can do some tricks on that :) like make it an elemental hero fusion even if the materials are not elemental heros ... thats a good idea and all .........................7/10