Rabidhamster1 Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Edited with the rest of the cardsEach Standby Phase, you may discard 1 card from your hand to destroy 1 in card in your opponent's hand at random. If the destroyed card is a monster, you may pay 500 Life Points to increase the ATK of this card by the destroyed monster's level x150. When this card is Summoned, select 1 of the following effects:*Add 1 "Deathbone Stalker" from your Deck to your hand.*Special Summon 1 "Deathbone Stalker" from your hand. "Deathbone Stalker"+"Tombbrood Minion"Each Standby Phase, lower the DEF of this monster by 500 and increase the ATK of any other monster on your field by 800 until the End Phase. Once this monster's DEF reaches 0, it is removed from play and all ATK and DEF values return to their original state. If this card is removed from play, Special Summon 1 of its Fusion Material Monsters to the field from your Graveyard. ---------All Pics from google------------------------------------------ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Bishop Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 3.7/10.. Sorry.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rabidhamster1 Posted December 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 can you explain why please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Vanilla (non effects) are looked down around here, for "lack of creativity"Personally, I think it's decent as far as vanilla's go. Your description isn't bad.Pic is a bit overused though...and 1200 5-star is rather UP.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rabidhamster1 Posted December 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 ty for the feedback, ill make more effect monsters :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sigma Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 No Vanillas, Make this card an effect next time, lower the stars down to 4, and you need IMG Credit. 4.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 most members here will give you a neg feedback if they only see Normal Monsters......so my friend, i suggest you give this card an effect or just keep making effect monsters...unless of course the Normal Monsters are needed in some sort of Tributing......so................. ??/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 PLease add an effect. Make the ATK 1700. Maybe make the effect this: Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to destroy one card on the field. If the discarded card was a monster, you can pay 500 Life Points to have this card gain ATK equal to the Level of the discarded monster, x150. Just an idea. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rabidhamster1 Posted December 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Ok, im going to just discard this one but thank you for the advice. I'll make effect monsters from now on.Actually scratch that ill make this into a fusion and repost Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rabidhamster1 Posted December 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 can i get new comments now that i changed them to fusion? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted December 16, 2008 Report Share Posted December 16, 2008 Close in the space in the fusion. Every = Each Standby Phase Take out the 2nd sentence____________________________________________________ 2nd pic looks too realistic. The pic for the fusion looks like it would be the actual combination of the 2 material monsters. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rabidhamster1 Posted December 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2008 edited. Ty for the feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted December 16, 2008 Report Share Posted December 16, 2008 5/10. Why's Deathbone Stalker a lv 5?Also, Tombfang's effect is off, possibly. You lower it's DEF, and once it's ATK reaches 0 it's destroyed... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rabidhamster1 Posted December 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2008 oh ok ty that was wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted December 16, 2008 Report Share Posted December 16, 2008 No vannilas 3.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 turn the fusion material monsters into efect monsters... that should help :) also give more power to the fusion.something like:Once per turn during your Standby Phase, decrease this card's DEF by 500 points to increase 1 monster's ATK by 800 points until the End Phase. when this card's DEF becomes 0, remove this card from play and Special Summon 1 of its Fusion Material Monsters from your Graveyard in face up Defense Position. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rabidhamster1 Posted December 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 I like that effect ty... Ill have to think of some effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hayden351 Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 The monster is weak deathbone stalker should be like 1700 ATKand why is its defence so high? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 thanks ^-^ and Fuzzie's suggestion could be the effect of your Deathbone Stalker now you only need the effect of the spider :) suggestion for your Toombrood Minion:When this card is Summoned, select 1 of the following effects:*Add 1 "Deathbone Stalker" from your Deck to your hand.*Special Summon 1 "Deathbone Stalker" from your hand. mwahahaha .............................. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rabidhamster1 Posted December 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 thanks ^-^ and Fuzzie's suggestion could be the effect of your Deathbone Stalker now you only need the effect of the spider :) suggestion for your Toombrood Minion:When this card is Summoned' date=' select 1 of the following effects:*Add 1 "Deathbone Stalker" from your Deck to your hand.*Special Summon 1 "Deathbone Stalker" from your hand.[/b'] mwahahaha .............................. Ok changes made, i really like the new effects. Can i have a rating? (although the effects weren't even mine :P) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 look what I have for you in case you want to use it ^-^ [spoiler= Toombrood Minion]oops too late for my spider LOLI would suggest leaving your "Deathbone Stalker" on Level 5 ^-^" that's why the spider summons him :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rabidhamster1 Posted December 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 ok will do :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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