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No se ingles T_T asi que el efecto lo escribo en castellano :P

 

 

Saludos

 

Ya estoy por terminar mi 5ta expancion creada por mi pero todo esta en castellano :) y me da flojera subir todas las imagnes de las cartas :P

 

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aki 1 probadita :)

 

siempre estoy al pendiente pero pues no les entiendo mucho a lo que dicen ya que soy mexicano y por eso no posteo nada :P...

 

me gustaria que isieran un foro latino de este tipo para poder desembolverme en mi idioma :P

 

good luck friends :P

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ok. pues sobre la ortografia de la carta no puedo sugerir nada por que casi nunca me a tocado ver cartas en español. pero aun asi le entiendo bien al efecto... la carta esta bien en si (a mi me gusto :) ) 9/10

 

la traduccion al ingles para el resto de la gente que no le entiende seria:

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. If this card is Tribute Summoned successfully, you can destroy 2 cards your oponent controls. If there are less than 2 cards on your oponent's field when this effect is activated, remove from play the differense of cards from your Graveyard.

 

ya el OCG (Oficial Card Grammar) o la forma de escribirla me la corregiran el resto de la gente que vea esto ^-^

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the picture is really good

the first part of the effect i think is the correct ocg, but for the 2nd part, i get what the effect is but i dont think that is the correct ocg but i am quite new myself and ocg is where I tend to fail.

 

i think your spanish arent you, well "muy bien", 7.5/10

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I think he is... I live in between U.S. and Mexico. so I'm indirerent to whether its in English or Spanish :) I wonder where is he from.... hmmmm....


and by the way thanks... I myself have OCG failures (at least 1 in every card) so I would really encourage people correcting my translation

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shut up professor u dont know anything on how to rate cards yeahyour card is brilliant as a beginner

 

Hey' date=' cyber, {NOOB}, shut up about what you say, i mean , you make terrible cards, and shouting at a senior member is just stupid.

Why are you saying "you dont know anything about to rate cards", he does, you mean, YOU DONT KNOW HOW TO RATE CARDS.

 

Anyway, on topic, [i']me encanta[/i] your card, and i especially like the picture.

8/10. Muy Bien, Senor.

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