Shiranui Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 [align=center]Please Comment[/align] Effect: When this card is successfully Tribute Summoned you can destroy up to 2 Spell or Trap Cards on the field. Once per duel, during your Battle Phase you can discard 5 cards from your hand to attack all face-up monsters on your opponent's field. This card cannot attack during the Battle Phase its effect was used. This card cannot attack if you have no cards in your hand. Image Credit: Photobucket (sorry friend sent it to me) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sigma Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 I think it's kind of OP'ed I believe, also, you need IMG Credit. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 this is way broken........?/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 I agree with that it is overpowered, but you do have good OCG7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted December 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 Thanks. I fixed it as best I could. Any tips on how to work it better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 suggestion:that last effect is too much. in fact ^-^ I'm happy with only the 1st one. and reduce the attacking to "attack twice" :) 8/10 is not that people doen't want to comment your cards... lots of people have final exams this week and other things to do....just wait until vacations and it will change ...in fact .. I shouldn't be here.. I have my english final tomorrow :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jericho Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 oh my god. posting that picture makes you a furry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted December 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 Yeah and you have a problem with that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 just how can this card attack if its your opponents turn...unless you mean cannot attack during your next turn... still seems a bit ov'pw..maybe change the 'one time only, during the duel' effect to the 'activate a trap card from your hand' instead of the 'attack all monster opponent controls'... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted December 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 Hm...yeah perhaps...What I was really going for on that effect was, since it's an archer card, for it to be able to fire multiple 'arrows' at one time hence the discarding card effect along with the last effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 yea....... that makes sense.......then i suggest you take out the 'activate trap card during opponents turn' out....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted December 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 There we go. Done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.B. strategist Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 Spell or Trap Cards1, not one Most people would use this card just for the first effect, the second effect isn't worth it unless you have the cards on the field to end the duel that turn. Overall fairly balanced, good ocg and okay pic. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted December 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxdemonicfuxoffxx Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 make lv 8capitalize Cardonly one time during this duel = once per duel well, still sorta oped cuz i mean, killing 3 spell/trap?seems even more broken then dadbut the end is good now 7.5/10 o and how bout make the def 2000? i like neat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted December 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 Alright, I'll fix this one last time then I'm gonna add one more card and head off. Thanks for the corrections btw. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tabris Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 Basically Mobius and Final Destiny when menstruatin'. Needless to say: 0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxdemonicfuxoffxx Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 now its nearly perfect but... (sry)"up to 2 Spell or Trap Cards" (the cap C)discard FROM your handThis card cannot attack during the Battle Phase of the turn this effect was activated. 8.25/10 now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted December 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 @Tabris: Thanks for the help...not. Anyhow thanks a lot for the final fixes. Added 'em so hope you're happy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tabris Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 Haven't been too much "help", I'm afraid. So, I'm goin' to rectify such: When this card is Tribute Summoned, destroy up to 2 cards on the field. This card can attack all face-up monsters that your opponent controls once each. Hope that satisfies you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 Tribute Summoned successfully, good pic, change to EARTH, the effect after the 5 discard effect is pointless. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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