Budrun Posted December 28, 2008 Report Share Posted December 28, 2008 This is my first card so I wanted to see what everyone thought. Constructive criticism is appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vanir Posted December 28, 2008 Report Share Posted December 28, 2008 The problem I see is that sacrificing one monster is just the standard summoning condidtions of a 6-star monster. The whole "This card cannot be.." is irrelevant, and technically incorrect. Sacrificing a monster is standard summoning procedure for that kind of monster. Try making it either more specific sacrifices, or take out that part of the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
summonedskull_90 Posted December 28, 2008 Report Share Posted December 28, 2008 very nice for a first card i like it 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted December 28, 2008 Report Share Posted December 28, 2008 Balanced but tilting on UP'd. Image isn't too good. Slight OCG Errors. Not too bad for your first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted December 28, 2008 Report Share Posted December 28, 2008 OCG Fix:-. one => 1-. Raise the ATK of this card by half of the Tribute monster's ATK => This card gains helf of the Tributed monster's ATK I don't see the UP'd part of this card. Infact, it's a little bit OP'd. Tribute Blue-Eyes to Special Summon this card, voila, you have a 3300 ATK monster in 1 turn by only Tributing 1 monster. The problem I see is that sacrificing one monster is just the standard summoning condidtions of a 6-star monster. The whole "This card cannot be.." is irrelevant' date=' and technically incorrect. Sacrificing a monster is standard summoning procedure for that kind of monster. Try making it either more specific sacrifices, or take out that part of the effect.[/quote'] This card is different! It says it can't be Normal Summoned! The thing you're talking about is Normal Summon! Learn to play before you comment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killerke83 Posted December 28, 2008 Report Share Posted December 28, 2008 nice for your first card 7/10 i agree with the previous comments .... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted December 28, 2008 Report Share Posted December 28, 2008 I like it! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted December 28, 2008 Report Share Posted December 28, 2008 Kinda weird, but other than that. . . .8/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted December 28, 2008 Report Share Posted December 28, 2008 This reminds me of that 1200 ATK Warrior that can be Special Summoned by Tributing one Warrior and that gains the Tributed monster's ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted December 28, 2008 Report Share Posted December 28, 2008 Do not double Type. Undead is not a Type. Use Zombie.paying = Tributing1 monster as Tribute = 1 monster you controlAt least you read the rules...7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted December 28, 2008 Report Share Posted December 28, 2008 Undead is not a Type. Use Zombie. Since Undead (or' date=' rather, Undea[b']t[/b]) is the OCG name for Zombies, I don't think using it as the Type in place of the inaccurate TCG name would be a real problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 28, 2008 Report Share Posted December 28, 2008 undead = zombieangel = fairyTributed = released I don't see a problem with that :) the jappanesse way sounds cooler.. and its more accurate for things like for example:you want to make a ghost.. it isn't nessesarily a zombie if you analyze it correctly.. so its type is undead... but here in americans.. it was translated to zombie.. I think for the same stupid people that dubbed the yugioh series so badly and kinda made the shows suck with the sensures.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted December 28, 2008 Report Share Posted December 28, 2008 Maybe make the effect a little longer (or more interesting) Pic could possibly use a better background. Maybe a more gloomy-like background. OR: 7.5/10NR: 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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