iKiller Posted January 1, 2009 Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 [align=center]Hello everyone!It's been a while since I've been making cards, but I thought that I'd enter a contest, since I need more points for a name change. So, I made the card, and here it is! It's my holo sheet, and I did all of the card edits, so thank me for the amazingness of this card! I think it has perfect OCG, so see if you can spot an error in it, and defeat me at OCG'ing! [spoiler=Old Version] [spoiler=Card Lore]This card can only be Summoned by Tributing 1 face-up Level 8 or higher DARK Spellcaster-Type monster from your side of the field. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, Special Summon 1 "Hatchling Token" (Dragon-Type/FIRE/Level 1/ATK 1000/DEF 800) in Defense Position to your side of the field. "Hatchling Tokens" cannot be used for a Tribute for a Tribute Summon (or Set). This card gains 1000 ATK for each "Hatchling Token" you have Tributed using this cards effect. You can Tribute 1 "Hatchling Token" from your side of the field to destroy 1 face-up card your opponent controls and inflict damage to your opponents Life Points equal to this cards current ATK. [spoiler=New Version] This card can only be Summoned by Tributing 1 face-up Level 8 or higher DARK Spellcaster-Type monster. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, Special Summon 1 "Hatchling Token" (Dragon-Type/FIRE/Level 1/ATK 1000/DEF 800) in Defense Position. "Hatchling Tokens" cannot be used as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon (or Set). This card gains 1000 ATK for each "Hatchling Token" you have Tributed using this card's effect. You can Tribute 1 "Hatchling Token" to destroy 1 face-up card your opponent controls and inflict damage to your opponent equal to this card's ATK. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daytimefrogger Posted January 1, 2009 Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 uuuuuuummmmmmmmmm....... i don't think the picture should be out of the frame it makes it look kinda werid Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iKiller Posted January 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 The fact that it's out of the frame makes it unique that it's mine. Anyone that knows me knows that I spend time making my cards look absolutely obliterating to others cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted January 1, 2009 Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 Edits on card = win. ^_^ I like it's concept alot, but the image should be more centered. ... I like it. O. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iKiller Posted January 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 I couldn't edit the card and make it in the center, the original image was sorta like that, had no cuffs on the right hand sleeve. Still, thanks, but about the card itself now... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted January 1, 2009 Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 It's too slow. UPd since you have to sack an 8 Spellcaster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iKiller Posted January 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 Huh? And it's not too slow, because I have a few more card idea's I'll implement soon, and this card won't seem too useless :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 I spy a couple errors. ^_^ Not tellin' where though... The pic popping out of the card looks cool though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 love pic... 7/10 not like the regualr tuners... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Awesome and yet I know how you made the pop-out picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iKiller Posted January 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Awesome and yet I know how you made the pop-out picture. Yep' date=' I rendered part of the image ^.^ love pic... 7/10 not like the regualr tuners... Regular Tuners are boring! Mine is unique and doesn't have to be a Tuner, I just thought I'd make it one :P I spy a couple errors. ^_^ Not tellin' where though... The pic popping out of the card looks cool though. :/ You're really useful, I want to know where the errors are. Is it OCG errors, picture errors, or what?And thanks :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 I just love your pop out images, very original. Though i'd say the left arm (It's left) is sticking out a bit too much, but still a very nice pic. I cannot spot any OCG errors in this card. lol at the fact that a level 2 monster 'can only be Summoned by Tributing 1 face-up Level 8 or higher DARK Spellcaster-Type'. It may seem underpowered, but i'd say it isn't as it can become incredably powerful and your able to destroy your opponent's monsters, and at the same time inflict damage. Hell, it may even be ovepowered, but i'd say balanced. An amazing card overall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iKiller Posted January 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Congrats on your 6,000th post Spire!And thanks alot, but it wouldn't have looked right if I removed half of his left arm -.-' Lol. The hardest part was the holoing, I didn't want to have too little holoed, so I had to blur holo the fire -.- And thanks, the effect was also hard to come up with, took a while, and I'm impressed, it's my first Token card :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Well I just think: [spoiler=sueysjkn] And the holoing is very cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iKiller Posted January 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 The holoing sucks :P And I know it's sticking out a bit too much, but I can't help it :'( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 The holoing dosen't suck, it goes well with the card, it looks like hes creating a storm of some kind. And the effect is pretty original, so 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iKiller Posted January 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 The image is meant to look like he's brewing up a storm... Lol, the holoing makes it look terrible. But still, thanks for the 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan LeFlay Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 I think it has perfect OCG, so see if you can spot an error in it, and defeat me at OCG'ing! Ok, I'm bored.Blue = actual OCG fixes.Red = unneccessary text (as there was a lot) This card can only be Summoned by Tributing 1 face-up Level 8 or higher DARK Spellcaster-Type monster from your side of the field. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, Special Summon 1 "Hatchling Token" (Dragon-Type/FIRE/Level 1/ATK 1000/DEF 800) in Defense Position to your side of the field. "Hatchling Tokens" cannot be used as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon (or Set). This card gains 1000 ATK for each "Hatchling Token" you have Tributed using this card's effect. You can Tribute 1 "Hatchling Token" from your side of the field to destroy 1 face-up card your opponent controls and inflict damage to your opponents Life Points equal to this card's current ATK. This card can only be Summoned by Tributing 1 face-up Level 8 or higher DARK Spellcaster-Type monster. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, Special Summon 1 "Hatchling Token" (Dragon-Type/FIRE/Level 1/ATK 1000/DEF 800) in Defense Position. "Hatchling Tokens" cannot be used as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon (or Set). This card gains 1000 ATK for each "Hatchling Token" you have Tributed using this card's effect. You can Tribute 1 "Hatchling Token" to destroy 1 face-up card your opponent controls and inflict damage to your opponent equal to this card's ATK. Other issues are, is it a normal summon or a special summon (need to specify)? If special, can it be normal summoned or set? The card itself is okay I guess, hard to say if it's overpowered really, and I'm too tired to judge that. Also, picture is ftw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iKiller Posted January 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Thanks for the help :D +Rep for this :P I like having unnecessary text, even the pros still use it, but it makes the card effect look longer, thus more professional :P The OCG thread says you should have the apostrophe in card's, thats why that's there.And as for the other one (as), the official cards use that, thats why I did... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan LeFlay Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 To make it clear, you didn't have the apostrophe, and you used for instead of as but I changed it. :P (The one on the bottom is the finalized version from my edits, where I took out all the red text. The blue text is what I added or changed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iKiller Posted January 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Sure. I'll fix it now, if you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan LeFlay Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Heh, it doesn't really matter to me, I just thought you were confused by my edits (which I wouldnt be surprised, its 6 AM here and I havent slept yet :P) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iKiller Posted January 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 It's 12am here at the moment, the Afternoon, so I'm still sleepy, no idea what I'll be like when I get back to school :'( Fixed version added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iKiller Posted January 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Bump. I spent ages on this, I want more ratings :'( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iKiller Posted January 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Double-Bump :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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