Jovi Siagian Posted January 6, 2009 Report Share Posted January 6, 2009 [align=center] Card's artwork from http://media.photobucket.com/image/magma%20dragon/PrimusZero1/magma_dragoon.png?o=1[/align] Comment, rate or hate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hobbes96 Posted January 6, 2009 Report Share Posted January 6, 2009 whoa. 5000 ATK monster. oped, but ok i guess Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted January 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2009 I know T_T. I don't know hot to add a negative effect for this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leon Lonewolf Posted January 6, 2009 Report Share Posted January 6, 2009 idk why you made him psychic when e look more of a pyro or machine, nut its pretty good. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted January 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2009 I haven't made many Psychics, so I decided to make one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucky 13 Posted January 6, 2009 Report Share Posted January 6, 2009 Even though it is a Level 9 monster the ATK increase should only happen until the end of the turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fayt08 Posted January 6, 2009 Report Share Posted January 6, 2009 Card effect should only last til end of turn. I'm also agreed with the above replies, it does look more like Pyro monster. Otherwise, not bad at all 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hobbes96 Posted January 6, 2009 Report Share Posted January 6, 2009 add this.During your End Phase, pay 500 Life Points. If you do not, you lose Life Points equal to this card's current ATK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BulletMan Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 multiple = multiples kinda OP'ed. should be until the End Phase and higher cost. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobbyman46 Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 its a cool background and decent picture but its a little over powered. I could just go to an easy 5000ATK. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joe.King Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 It's Cyborg-ish. That's why its Psychic.Also, there hasn't been a FIRE or WATER Psychic. Creative.The effect is OP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 I would say either increase the amount needed to bring it out, or give it a bigger downfall.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 you want something as a payment don't have to look further ;) I know how to do a card underpowered :lol: make it so you pay multiples of 1000 instead... and make this monster increase only half the points.(not all) and do (max 4000) so it will be about the same but for a bigger costupgrade it to level 11 or something like that...then make it so the materials are harder to get...something like -> 1[name of tuner] + 1 or more non-Tuner [an attribute you want it to be] Psiquic-Type monsters those are some suggestions..so you can choose within those :DI kinda like the pic :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gamekrazzy Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 You can make it less OP'ed by adding a balancing effect afterwards like "At the end of the End Phase of this turn, return this monster's ATK to it's Original ATK." or something to that effect. XD! I just made a funny! Ok... Maybe not.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted January 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 I'm too lazy too change the card for now. I'll do that later. It's Cyborg-ish. That's why its Psychic.Also' date=' there hasn't been a FIRE or WATER Psychic. Creative.[/quote'] This. Other than the reason I posted before, this is why I make this into Psychic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted January 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 Okay, I updated the card. It looks like I overdo the effect of the card with Photoshop....T.T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Schitzofrenic Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 i think normal atk should be 2400, to make it less overpowered, try to look at monster demise, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spitfire skateboards Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 good card 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battousai52606 Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 SWEET! Oh, by the way, is anyone else having problems with the card uploader? Ever since last night, I've tried to upload images, but they don't show up when uploaded....and I've tried it reloading the card creator in multiple browsers, but to no avail...anyone have any ideas? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 OP'd. You also have some OCG errors. I like the editing, thought. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 The high life point cost balances out the op-ness of the monster, making it good. But try to make the tuner monster involved must be a psychic monster... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DJ- Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 not realistic but decent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 yes about that... if by uploading the pics from the ones you have in your computer, the image is just a black ...black.. then try removing the pics from your computer and save them again... that works for me :D about the card.. looks alot better to me (and balanced)I have something to say about the pic... its a good pic and it has details and everything but the fact that is just standing and you can see it in the card (completely) makes me imagine.. If I was the one looking at the pic and having the idea of a card... I would have imagined a weaker monster for him... look for example... obelisk the tormentor... he is so great strong and almighty that he doesn't fit completely in the card...although you can see most of him... the pic (regardless of how good it is) doesnt seem so powerful.....(this was just an opinion.. not even a suggestion )^-^"(I'm just a pic perfectionist sometimes *slap myself*) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daichi159 Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 Awesome! Brilliant! Speechless! the effect is good but the thing is you keep having to pay LP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 well its less OPed now...its really good now...9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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