.Requiem Posted January 14, 2009 Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 Apprentice of the Flame Archer When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can send this card to the Graveyard. If this card is sent to the Graveyard by this card's effect, activate the following effect: both players Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower monster from their hand in face-up Defense Position. During the 3rd Standby Phase after you activated this effect, remove all monsters on the field from play. Inflict 400 damage to both players for each WATER, LIGHT or FIRE monsters removed from play by effect of this card. Tell me if you see any OCG errors o.O Pic is from Photobucket.com under searching anime archer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Max Posted January 14, 2009 Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 I think battle = as a result of battle, may be wrong though. "when this card is sent to the Graveyard, activate the following effect" again may be wrong. monster = monsters. I find the effect to be intersting though. I like Variation. Hope the OCG fixes help you. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted January 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 Result of battle is wrong.I am not sure about the second one, but I will have the legend or elite cardmakers check it out. oops didn't see that thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Max Posted January 14, 2009 Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 Result of battle is wrong.I am not sure about the second one' date=' but I will have the [b']legend or elite cardmakers[/b] check it out. oops didn't see that thanks.That hurts you know that :P Joking lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted January 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 I was talking about the clubs. Sorry if I offend you in anyway. LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brittle Ice Posted January 14, 2009 Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can send it to the Graveyard. If this card is sent to the Graveyard by its own effect, both players can Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower monster from their hand in face-up Defense Position. After 3 of your Standby Phases, remove all monsters on the field from play. Inflict 400 damage to both players for each WATER, LIGHT and FIRE monster removed from play by this card's effect. I'm not sure for that: After 3 of your SP...So - So...A few OCG mistakes, good picture and original effect...8 / 10^__^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted January 14, 2009 Report Share Posted January 14, 2009 When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can send this card to the Graveyard. If this card is sent to the Graveyard by this cards effect, activate the following effect. Both players Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower monster from their hand in face-up Defense Position. During the 3rd Standby Phase after you active this effect, remove all monsters on the field from play. Inflict 400 Direct Damage to both players for each WATER, LIGHT or FIRE monsters removed from play by this cards effect. I think that should be the correct OCG. 7/10, mostly because of some nasty OCG errors and because it is completley UPed unless you have a Deck based on DARK, EARTH and WIND monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted January 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 Well the effect effects some of the mostly used attributes in my opinion and I am trying new types of effects. So thanks for the fixing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brittle Ice Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 People forget about the: Activate the following effect part!It is only used with Gemini monsters and dice effects... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∮.Ғσяgσттeи.SσℓÐιєя.∮ Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 it's pretty good OCG.i like it.pic is good.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted January 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 Well I never used Gemini I stopped playing 2 years ago. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brittle Ice Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 Well I never used Gemini I stopped playing 2 years ago. I think they didn't exist 2 years ago.Anyway,listen to me! xDI'm not sure about that part for 3 Standby Phases... Other is correct. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted January 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 I think it is, but that is why I am asking people. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brittle Ice Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 During the 3rd Standby Phase after this card's activation...Maybe like that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted January 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 I don't think that works well after. This card's effect can only be activated in the graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tabris Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 4/10' date=' mostly because of some nasty OCG errors and because [b']it is completely UPed unless you have a Deck based on DARK, EARTH and WIND monsters[/b]. That. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted January 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 Well the effect effects some of the mostly used attributes in my opinion and I am trying new types of effects. So thanks for the fixing.Also what happens if you had a deck that runs off those cards then you can inflict to him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 By far, one of the weirdest effects ever o_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted January 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 Well I am trying to get unique effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted January 15, 2009 Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 Personally I think I have the stangest effect ever but that's off topic. Consider boosting the card's ATK by a little bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted January 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 15, 2009 Thanks I will think about it. Does any else want to rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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