.Requiem Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 Rainbow Dragon - The New Awakening Yes this is remake of Rainbow Dragon This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by sending 3 "Crystal Beast" cards with different names in your Spell & Trap Card Zone to the Graveyard. Once per turn, increase this card's ATK by 300 for each "Crystal Beast" monster in your Graveyard until the End Phase. Once per turn, you can send the top card of your Deck to the Graveyard, if the card is a "Crystal Beast" monster, you can Special Summon that card in face-up Defense Position. If this card is sent to the Graveyard by an effect of a Spell or Trap Card, you can Special Summon 2 Level 4 or lower "Crystal Beast" monsters from your Graveyard in face-up Defense Position. Tell me what you think. http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Rainbow_Dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbaclark Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 I can barely even rate it, your effect doesn't really make any sense. It seems so repetitive. I like your picture and the name a alot. But until I can understand the effect, 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted January 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 How can you not understand the effect. It is good and simple. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubbaclark Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 Ok I understand it more now after reading it a few times, but, did you make this "Crystal Beast" card yet? If so, can you post it? That's probably the reason I don't get it. I never saw that card. Ok well 9/10 now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted January 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 Crystal beast is from TCG. This is a remake of rainbow dragon. http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Crystal_Beasts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 ' date=' but, did you make this "Crystal Beast" card yet? If so, can you post it? That's probably the reason I don't get it. I never saw that card.[/quote'] that's an epic quote (LOL) If this card is sent to the Graveyard by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card that's the only thing I saw.. the pic is exactly raibow dragon so.. I'm not grading pic at all.. if you don't agree with the "the" part I wrote.. at least write "an" instead of "a" .. is correct basic grammar... the card is 8/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted January 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 I know this card is for the contest. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 very nice card. and the effect is cool. some OCG errors but is ok...10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 Kinda UP'd to be honest, original RD is better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted January 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 I fixed it up how is it now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 original RD is better. Balanced wise, you mean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted January 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 How can I fix it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 Don't give it instant 4200. It's a boss monster, yes, but 3000 seems fine. -LP Gain Effect-Top Deck Effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted January 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 So increase the attack and take away the life points gain and type monster effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 Rethought it.-ATK Gain Effect.+Deck Thing Effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted January 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 -LP Gain Effect-ATK Gain Effect.+Deck Thing Effect This what you are saying Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 That's what I'm saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 It's effect is actually pretty good and from what I can tell it would help the actual CB deck (I'm dumb and run one) soz...9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted January 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 I change somethings around what you said. Tell if it isn't balanced or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 You put the first effect in twice. I'm not sure if I just run a stupid deck but getting 5 in your Spell Zone is actually really hard... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted January 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 I will change from 5 to 3. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 agree with crimsonwolf... you posted the summoning conditions twice. also, there is an unnesesary part in the last effect: you can Special Summon 2 Level 4 or lower "Crystal Beast" monsters from your Graveyard in face-up Defense Position.(all Crystal Beast monsters are Level 4 or lower.... and you don't need " " around Crystal Beast) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 Okay, I was confused at first, but reading through everything I get it now. Great card. 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted January 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 I didn't notice I fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darklord33 Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 effect is well balanced (maybe a bit to long but still good). cool name. maybe another pic (just some little changes would be enough)? still i like the concept -> 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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